The Foolish Heir Who Defends the Nation

Can I sleep with a woman? The queen won't let it go?

Vulgar character, no bottom line

It's a grind to write, and I can't get anything done. I've pulled a lot of threads, but haven't solved any of them. I just keep filling in the holes. If you want to read smooth and enjoyable writing, don't fall into the trap.

How to say it? The plot is barely rich enough, but it's too lengthy. If you want to read well, you can only skip and read, but if you skip and read, you won't be able to connect to the plot, and then you won't be able to read it.

There are two conditions for the protagonist to find a partner: a living female. Even if they just meet, they will be in love with each other. It's clearly written about a different world, but there are occasional similarities. Are there peppers 🌶️, peanuts 🥜 ​​and so on in that world? You can edit it as you like. I want you to explain to the readers how a piece of wool, 9.9 Yuan with free shipping, came to China from Africa, America, and Oceania. Even if it reaches the flower grower, it has nothing to do with the plot you wrote, right?

The author doesn't know much about the ancient royal family. The emperor's orders cannot be violated. If the emperor wants his ministers to die, they must die. What kind of evidence can he tell you? Suspicion is enough. He has to collect a lot of evidence. You should write suspense.

Not bad

It's too grinding. And there's too much useless content

Beginning Rape Stallion 🐴 Article

I feel bad after reading this chapter, Seeder