I Inherited a Bug-Type Gym and Became the Ultimate Psychic Champion

The plot is okay and the writing is okay, but have you really understood Pokémon? King Slow's garbage attack and Boscodora's combined attack? Still won? Do you know what the guaranteed level of Boscordora is? The male protagonist is okay, but the knowledge of Pokémon is too crude and unfamiliar, and he is the type who has not played it a few times.

I feel that the invincible text is not invincible enough, the cool text is not exciting enough, and then the combat power system is completely broken. The kind of newborn baby beats others at the gym level, and uses modifiers to increase the personal value, but it can't beat them. You are more than 30 levels and you are trying to kill someone. Are you being polite? It looks like a cute new baby with level 100 and full personal value beating others. Then regarding the combat power, there is no division at all. There is a reason why people use the levels of Pokemon to divide them. Your entire gym, the entire king-level one, beats other novice trainers. Don't say that the one who doesn't start well, you still catch the king-level one and beat them. This is not a gym. To sum up, the subject matter of this kind of article is very novel, and the writing is interesting at the beginning, but it becomes more and more chaotic later on. With more than 80 chapters, it is about to beat the mythical beast, which is too outrageous. I hope the author will adjust his writing rhythm. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes. I hope that the author will continue to work hard if he has so many reviews, but he should read more of what he writes.

As long as you conquer it, you will be invincible without thinking. I can't understand the baby spirit's choice of the main gym leader. Moreover, Pokémon's Gym will not directly send the main force, you will directly send the main force. If you want to win 8 badges, how come you have to be a king player to win them? Otherwise, average gym trainers may not be able to get 8 badges.

A particularly annoying and vulgar point: when someone wants to be the apprentice of the protagonist, in this case, you can accept it if you want. If you don't accept it, just refuse and drive him away. You have to refuse first, then others beg, and finally accept the apprentice through a routine.

It feels like it has nothing to do with Pokémon. It has the feeling of Long Aotian wearing Pokémon. There is no description of the battle of Pokémon. It is just crushing and invincible.

This interesting plot is for you before you accept a disciple. I originally thought it was a good novel, but I didn't expect that it would fall into the cliché. If you add a super power to an insect type, you accept a completely unrelated apprentice. I really didn't expect it. It would have been nice if you had been taught by the gym leader for a short time like in other novels, but I didn't expect you to be a real disciple.

Why do you always write about women? Can't you live without writing about women? The key thing is written down below.

The author's outlook is problematic, and the protagonist's behavior is also problematic. He is very murderous, and it is obviously not a very intense conflict, but he actually treats others as bugs. For a while, I wanted to be indifferent and aloof, but after a while, I was extremely concerned about my own interests. The challenge of writing about eighteen gyms one by one is a direct disincentive. Shuangwen actually uses such a long and extremely bland plot, which is a waste of time. I do not recommend that any minors read this novel, so as not to be led astray by the author.

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