My Crimes

I feel sorry for myself. I have been created by the author again and again, but I still have expectations for her. Old article filters are harmful. As the author grows older and more experienced, he loves and empathizes more with men. The full text is very much like a yy cool article by a vicious male author. The author gives the male protagonist a pretty face, money, power, and a body, and all the women in the novel will love him without having to do anything. When he didn't love the heroine, he hurt her without caring about her life or death, causing permanent physical and mental damage to her. Once you fall in love, you don't even have to look back, you don't have to chase your wife, the heroine has traveled thousands of miles to get her. The heroine finally stopped loving her, and he deceived and forced her at all costs regardless of her wishes. He wanted her to live if he loved her, and wanted her to die if he hated her. Everything developed according to his likes and dislikes. The author inflicts suffering on women and ignores them. He does not pursue the injuries suffered by the heroine and lets it go. The unforgivable harm caused by the hero to the heroine is also written off after the heroine becomes an AI personality. This article is about the abuse of a girl: She was beaten with real swords and guns, she was physically and mentally abused, her family was destroyed, and she was abused by a boy: She doesn't love me anymore 💩 Of course, how could the author make the baby boy really endure hardship? The female protagonist who has lost the ability to empathize and no longer loves the male protagonist is completely inappropriate in the author's writing. Compared with the dead situation of not being able to be together, the male protagonist is happy and gets what he wants. And the most disgusting thing is that the author always uses the guise of killing the heroine in the back and torturing the man in the later stage to trick people into killing him. He talks one thing and does the other behind his back. It's better to be honest. I'm really tired.

After reading chapters 1-37, I feel that there is no need to read further. In order to pave the way for torture, some rough love scenes were deliberately created to create a hazy image of the first man and the second woman, but the writing was so dull that the two characters looked like robot tool men. The "deep friendship" between a girl and a girl that the author has always defended is not very sincere. It is all a superficial plot and written in a perfunctory way. In contrast, it is much harder to portray the occasional competition and jealousy between one girl and two girls. Later, when the threesome gradually begins, the friendship between the three protagonists does not deepen from shallow to deep, so the part where the first boy chooses the girl he loves reads like it reflects the brilliance of humanity that shines in the first girl, because she is willing to protect her two friends in her own way. The first male, like a machine with indifferent feelings, casually sacrificed the person he had known for a short time and whom he called a "friend". This kind of person does not look like someone who values ​​feelings and would protect his "beloved girl", but rather - whoever wants to be friends with him should consider his character.

If you don't read enough, Xiaoluan, please don't sleep. Can I update 30,000 words a day?

The three concepts of this article are so crude that I can't believe it's a new article in the past two years… The most important part of chasing a wife that readers are most looking forward to in this article has been briefly mentioned. Even chasing a wife requires the female protagonist to rush to find the male protagonist first. In the early stage, a huge amount of space was devoted to describing the secret relationship between the male protagonist and the second female protagonist. Later on, you may feel that the relationship cannot be reconciled, and it is very blunt to say that the male protagonist actually fell in love with the female protagonist at first sight. Author, didn't you laugh when you wrote this?ᴗ•💧 The emotional stripping of the female protagonist is also forced to be written, because in the author's opinion, the male protagonist is very charming. If the female protagonist is not forced to have no emotions, the female protagonist will definitely stick to the male protagonist for the rest of her life, instead of growing up and gaining a new understanding of the past events of the male protagonist in the process of growing up. New concepts and attitudes. Learn to put yourself first. The female characters of the same generation who appear in the whole story all like the hot and sweet male protagonist. I almost thought that I had mistakenly entered some kind of male harem story, and the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist have to be set off by the female protagonist who pursues her in the later stage. If you like to see the heroine become unlucky when she meets the hero, watch it. If you like to see the hero turn into a serf and turn a singer into a CEO, watch the heroine's family ruined. If you like to see a child suddenly appear and restrain the heroine, watch it. If you like to watch female competition, don't miss it ❤️

I used to write romance about boys and girls, they were really invincible Reading the previous article will always take you back to the cardamom years

Is the way of writing solidified? The lack of aura makes the shortcomings more obvious.

I was disappointed with the series I followed earlier, so I didn't pursue it later. In order not to give up halfway, I finished reading this article. The character setting of this article is relatively boring, the previous plot is bland, and the boy's story is boring and repetitive. The plot of growing up is confusing. Maybe it's a common problem with online writing these days. Those who can write 100,000 words may end up writing more than 600,000 words.

Very nice! A perfect story for summer reading. Luan Da's writing style is as gripping as ever, and many of the descriptions between the lines will make people want to shed tears. The sour story of youthful secret love was very touching, both sad and moving. I am looking forward to the following plot! Yuanyuan will be sweet~

I finally saw a new work coming out. The plot is as imaginative as ever. It's much better than writing for the sake of writing. I look forward to updating it soon. I hope to continue to output and write more good articles! Novels should originate from life and exaggerate their existence! I hope that friends who read the article will not have too strong a sense of involvement, and will not morally kidnap the characters in the article and attack the author instead!

The hot summer finally has you by my side