After Receiving the Certificate from the Xuanmen Boss, Mr. Huo Smelled so Good!

The ending is rather hasty. There is no mention of who the male protagonist was in his previous life, which immortal, when did her senior sister regain her previous memories, so she took action against the senior brother. Did the senior brother really disappear later? There is only one female supporting role. There is a lot left unexplained. It's unfinished.

It's pretty good, but the writing at the end is a bit hasty. I feel like the author wrote the ending in a hurry

The plot was pretty good, but I thought the ending was a bit hasty.

It started out okay at the beginning, it was a bit far-fetched to get together with the male protagonist, and the content became more and more dull as it went on. The ending was good, but it was also relatively simple. My husband was an immortal and came to earth. He died in the end and was resurrected in a flash by a golden dragon. So, is my brother's soul gone?

Sloppy ending

Overall, it's okay, but many of the plots are quite outrageous and unreasonable, and the male protagonist's character isn't very good either.

It's a short article, very interesting, and the plot is very good.

Lots of typos, looks good at first, but ends up being perfunctory

Perfunctory ending

The ending was really rushed and too perfunctory. If the ending is well written, it would be a good article.