I Haven't Traveled Through Time Yet, Do I Already Have God-Level Qualifications?

After reading almost half of it, the realm of cultivating immortals and the realm of high martial arts are all in a mess, jumping around and confusing. If you can't think of a title corresponding to a certain rank, can't you just write down which rank it is? What the hell are you writing? Others at least have a basic combat power system when they start Chuang Yue. You are Earth Xuan, Tian Xuan, and Venerable. I really don't know that a great elder of Earth Xuan breaks through and is Venerable. Am I drunk? How rare are the Venerables in the beginning? The Venerables break through and become Immortals, and they also become patrols. How can I write a novel without making an outline?

Too many adjectives are pure nonsense, and the forced pretense is embarrassing to death, which is worse than normal in a mental hospital. Rookies pecking at each other, suppressing each other at every turn, invincible Taoist mind, disgusting. Not recommended to watch. If you have this time, you might as well read some unsolved mysteries and ghost stories from around the world.

The realm is confusing, the sentences are not fluent, one moment is forty-four thousand pounds, the other is twenty thousand pounds, the plot has no highlights, the subject matter is really good, but the author's writing skills are not good enough, and he is not careful enough

What Phoenix inheritance can be snatched away by killing other orthodox forces? Attack the enemy with no brains

He was almost dead from poisoning, but it was hard to explain after hesitating about taking the elixir! Normal people shouldn't detoxify first and then think about it!

The protagonist feels like a fool!

A lot of nonsense, forced to pretend to be BI, and a state of confusion. There are too many poisonous points, and I can't stand the roar.

Average, okay in the early stage

You always show off and get slapped in the face, you are invincible

Stupid x999