The Warden Is Unfathomable!

Dahuang's writing style is the most comfortable I have ever read. The language is not complicated but it is able to describe the characters in detail, the movements are not sluggish, and the scenery and environment make the reader immersed in it (I really like the creation of this atmosphere). Support every book written by Rhubarb! ! !

Why does this book look so similar to me? I am learning to kill gods in a mental hospital. Is the protagonist of this book also a world consciousness? And that Hun Xi, when he returns, is similar to the Roaring Sky Dog in God-Slaying. Maybe it was written according to the template of Zhan Shen

I couldn't stand it until I got to chapter 50. I thought it was because of the difficulty at the beginning, but now I realize it's not the difficulty at the beginning, it's all about marketing. This is a completely deformed concept. Even Americans can't write like this. Everyone is evil. Only the protagonist is right. Humanity is already over.

Every book by the author is good to read, and other websites have been following it since 22 years ago until now. Every book makes me cry when it is written, and laugh when it is written. You'll regret it if you don't watch it.

To be honest, if you read it as a cool novel, it is very good, but if you read it with your brain, the logic is problematic in many places and the plot is cliched. For example, in the history of the organization, a lord who was timid even to sixth-level awakened people was killed by a fifth-level awakened person with just a few shots. With this logic, no matter how hard you try to exaggerate how hard he worked, he even sacrificed his life. But comparing it with the background you set, it seems that this section is entirely to deliberately let this supporting character die to advance the plot. Moreover, the later descriptions of the protagonist and the two heroines are too cliched. The character positioning and development at the beginning was actually very innovative, but why did they suddenly sleep together after not knowing each other for two days, and then the female protagonist could still accept the male protagonist very calmly after they had only known each other for a few days. And the subsequent plot is still deliberately pretentious after learning from other online articles, so that when I saw the first sentence of a plot, I knew: Oh, the protagonist is going to fight the young master, what kind of pretense is he going to do, and he is about to hug his ex when he meets her. Then I looked back and saw that it was exactly the same as the cliché. Moreover, the plot progressed too fast, and the male protagonist was not good enough. The training process was briefly mentioned, and suddenly it became a turning point for human beings to fight back. Doesn't this make the efforts of generations of people paved the way look like a joke? I personally think this is also the main reason for the confusion in the logic of the subsequent combat forces. Because the author's background setting at the beginning was different from the plot he wanted to write, I sincerely hope to improve it

The author has read every book, and this one is well written, but I always felt that the emotional scenes between the male protagonist and Lu Wanyin were a bit abrupt, and they got together very suddenly. I felt that they lacked the emotional components that love should have. For example, in the concealment stage, this is a stage of emotional ignorance. They will try to show their best side, hide their shortcomings, and try to let the other party see their strengths. ‌ As time goes by, both parties begin to discover each other's shortcomings. Life is no longer just sweet, and quarrels and conflicts begin. This is the stage when the relationship enters the running-in stage. ‌Both parties will try to communicate and change to adapt to each other. ‌ If both parties are unable to make concessions, they may enter a cooling-off period, during which both parties will begin to think about the relationship and whether to continue it. ‌This stage is also a period of emotional risk, ‌and is easily affected by external temptations. ‌After experiencing the running-in and cooling-off period, ‌if both parties can overcome the difficulties, ‌love will eventually defeat the temptation of the outside world, ‌the relationship will reach stability, and emotional change is a complex and changeable process. ‌After experiencing the initial attraction to the final stability, ‌the period is full of various challenges and changes. ‌Successful love requires understanding, ‌communication and efforts from both parties to overcome various difficulties and ‌finally reach a stable stage. If the work does not have early emotional foreshadowing and the male and female protagonists get together quickly without emotional fluctuations, such a love drama will not be beautiful. , For example, Mo Yu's emotional foreshadowing later is more delicate than Lu Wanyin's. If you want to write emotional scenes, emotional changes are very important. If you don't focus on emotions, I won't say it. I hope the author can optimize it in future works (personal suggestion, don't criticize if you don't like it) Colleagues hope that the author's works will become better and better

I really can't stand it anymore. Others are always attacking the protagonist, and then the protagonist never hits hard again and again. This kind of protagonist is more annoying than the Virgin protagonist. It really makes sense to be licked for five years at the beginning, because everyone knows that the protagonist can be bullied at will. It doesn't matter if he kills the protagonist or not, the most he will get is a beating anyway. If you succeed, you will earn blood, but if you fail, you will end up in the hospital for a few days.

The plot is very interesting. So cool, so cool, so cool, so cool, so cool, so cool, so cool. I couldn't stop watching it for a while. Yellow also describes it very well. That young man's passion could not be stopped. Recommendation index full stars

Damn I was fooled by the title

Advantages: The writing is good and smooth! The plot is confusing and even conflicting, the combat power system should be collapsed, and the protagonist's entire organization is the Holy Mother, and organizations all over the world want to step on it. It's not just a fictitious word, it's really the whole world, so I feel that this combat power system is rubbish! Sometimes strong and sometimes weak. In the context of the beast tide, humans have always lost. The last beast tide was because a super powerful beast appeared in the line of the Night Demon organization, and the leader of the Night Demon escaped. Therefore, organizations all over the world want to trample this organization, and they must pay all the compensation for those who died, but they only have three people. So confused, Holy Mother? This compensation is imposed. The protagonist appears and defeats the beast for the first time in the world. It is too easy. At the end, a powerful boost is added to show that only the protagonist can pass the level. However, the previous part is too easy, and two people can open a path. Not all cities in the world were swarmed with beasts at the same time. If they weren't so useless, they would have won the first time in the world, right? However, the first hundred or so chapters show how useless the high-level human beings are. How useless the teachers are. The trainees are all newly awakened, but they are better than the teachers. Strong tool people are also mentally weak or scheming. The main part is to write about the process of how newly awakened students pretend to be B and reverse it.