Junior Sister, We Really Can’t Keep Competing Anymore

The world is built on a grand scale, the enemies are also very powerful, but the writing is too complex and confusing, and the plot pace is too fast. Especially for immortality novels, generally speaking, shouldn't enemy secrets be revealed slowly? It's straightforward enough, and the heroine's own strength has not been improved and she just picks up treasures.

Is there a male protagonist?

Am I the only one who knocks the heroine and Mo Jinghong?

The plot is probably quite exciting, but there are some things I can't understand, such as how the heroine Feng Qingran learned how to make alchemy, set up formations, draw talismans, etc. Please tell me someone, thank you. It's just that I feel like there are more typos at the back.

It's simply outrageous. The heroine travels through the book "The Soul of Another World" and is a young casual cultivator. She gives out a bunch of martial arts and spiritual fruits to the senior brothers as gifts in return, and also writes inwardly. The heroine read the book and knew the development of the plot. The original heroine died at the hands of Su Yanran in every life. Every time she met Su Yanran, she chose to let it go, saying that there was no cause and effect and it was not convenient to take action. When I met a thief at the city gate, I caught the thief just to find out if it was Su Yanran's instruction. I gave the thief a thousand 3rd-grade spiritual stones for free. It was so funny that he was taken advantage of. I just relied on the resources in the bracelet, the spiritual fruits, the techniques, and the spiritual stones given by my senior brothers. In fact, I haven't earned a dime. He also plucked out Mo Jinghong's spiritual pet's mating feathers. Quite speechless. Liniang is Miaoyin and the law enforcer of Wenzhige. She was sent by the heroine to kill the demon Zongzhu. As a result, he was accepted as a disciple because of similar experiences to Chongji, and the heroine didn't even want any reward. The heroine knew clearly that the devil could not survive in the demon clan, so she went to the small world to seize human bodies and kill people for training, but she still chose to let it go and let Liniang watch, which was quite outrageous. Shouldn't potential enemies like this be kept under one's nose and controlled? If you leave it to others, it will not be easy to become Su Yanran's helper later. The heroine gives the impression that she is heroic, tall and attracts the wind, thinking that others dare not touch her. Thinking that with the support of Lingyun Sect, they would randomly give some high-level spiritual fruits to the strong, causing turmoil in the outside world. I completely forgot how I, a foundation-building cultivator, could have these precious spiritual fruits, and I was not afraid of being killed and silenced by others. This novel only focuses on cause and effect, such as thunder catastrophe destroying the Taoist heart. If it were any other novel, it wouldn't be as sophisticated. Killing and cheating are everywhere. I've seen chapter 50. What I write about the most are some trivial matters about the senior brothers, such as the promotion to Thunder Tribulation, such as the heroine's practice of martial arts, there is not even a hint of it, promotion is brushed off, and there is no fighting. Not much to see. Just watch if you like. Anyway, what I expressed is just my personal opinion.

I feel like this article has little to do with the heroine. It's basically about other people. Her appearance is like fireworks.

Very very very beautiful.

After reading a few chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. In order to highlight the fact that the heroine was written at a young age, the special effects are vicious and she kills people at every turn. During a Qi refining period, I actually injured the golden elixir or some other powerful power. This must be about cultivating immortals??😂 2. The heroine couldn't control her emotions as soon as she met the original heroine. She felt like she could be possessed on the spot, what a guy! The heroine you wrote is a heroine with adult memories, she is not stupid! There are also those spiritual plants, artifacts, secret books, etc. That are taken for free like picking up rags. I already have so many things, but seeing a child loses control of her emotions again and again. I am really speechless. After a few chapters, in addition to seeing all kinds of precious fairy spiritual plants, magic weapons, and skill secrets coming out, I encounter the original heroine who loses her temper again and again. I have never seen such bad writing.

After reading hundreds of chapters and reading the comments, I finally figured out what I always felt was weird. The heroine is not very good at it. From the beginning, she picked up a lot of junk stuff everywhere, and she wouldn't be able to use it if she really got into trouble. Then there are too many supporting characters. The whole story starts from the heroine, but does not revolve around her. It always writes about things that have little to do with the heroine. The plot is mixed and a bit confusing. The title of the book says that the heroine is the main character, but I don't see where she is. Then there is no description of the fighting scenes, which makes it a bit boring to watch.

The male partner and the female partner have their own thoughts. They are not blindly dependent on the heroine, but independent individuals.