HP: Miss Malfoy Just Wants to Make Money

What can I say, I have read several books written by Da Da, but this one is the most uncomfortable for me. I feel that Draco was written too badly, and the life experience of the heroine is also a bit too much. It's okay to have a tragic life experience, but... Anyway, I was disgusted by the early reading, maybe I can't accept similar novels... (Please delete if you don't like it, don't comment)

Read a little bit The heroine is set to be the reborn child of Regulus, who was calculated to be the daughter of Lucius Malfoy, and is only 2 months younger than Draco... The heroine's mother was set up by her brother to have a relationship with Lucius, and then followed the trend and set her daughter to be an illegitimate daughter who was cheated on his wife during the pregnancy (2 months) - this is not very clear. If the heroine's mother wants to say that this child is from the Black family, then it is the only grandchild. Sirius has been removed. Isn't Regulus's posthumous child better than an illegitimate daughter? ! After all, the Black family is also an ancient pure-blood family. 1. No verification using blood magic 2. The family genealogy seems to be verifiable (don't say Narcissa doesn't allow it, Abu is still there) Abu➕Lucius, the very cautious Malfoy, did not verify the blood magic The heroine was reborn, and then she kept watching Lucius and Narcissa without pampering her, not caring about her, and caring about an adult soul... Do you really not understand why? An illegitimate daughter who was born when her husband cheated on her when she was 2 months pregnant. Does the heroine really think that Narcissa is wrong for ignoring her? And the heroine herself knows the truth, she is not a child of this family I saw the author writing that he would be with Draco, but would not return to Malfoy Manor or anything like that... It was the heroine's mother's family who designed the Malfoy family. The heroine's biological mother is a victim, so aren't the Malfoys three victims? In the original book, the Draco family, who was doted on by his parents and had a happy family, had a broken family... Of course it is true. If the heroine grew up as a real child, there would be no problem at all, but she is not, and she knows the truth. She knows her identity very well...

Is there no long review? I think she can finish a book in such a short time 150 The book of 10,000 words is really great. Although it is a fanfic with the help of the plot of the original work, I think he really created the heroine very interestingly. I guess the author should have done a lot of homework on the business model. I like the chapters about the island the most. It is written in a small atmosphere of love. It was so good that I couldn't help but chuckle in the middle of the night. I also liked the extra episode with Lupine. I felt that I saw the possibility of their relationship from another angle. Even if I wasn't immersed in the original text, I would really feel heartbroken for Lupine's withdrawal and the heroine's temporary indifference. Fortunately, there is be, it turns out they can match. I think the story about Harry in the last extra story is very innovative. I didn't expect it to be told in the form of an interview. I thought it would be like the story about Lupin. Maybe the author is afraid of being too repetitive, but it does make me think that Malfoy is more suitable for the heroine, and Harry is not always that suitable. Every time in the text, the author adds a lot of notes to explain. I am actually a person who has not read the original work very much. I have read the first book and a little movie commentary, and I know very little about the plot, but the book written by the author is very restorative and allowed me to understand a lot of plots and terms, such as Animagus. Many plots are also vividly written, such as the search for her father in the Inferi and the maze of false crowns. I was very happy to read this book. It made me experience the magical world of Hogwarts. I hope the author can write more interesting stories.

Maybe I want to write a novel that is comparable to the original work, but the plot is too bland. It has been bombarded by online novels for so many years. The plot of the original work is not actually very ups and downs, but everything in the original work is new and will give people a sense of novelty. If this is the case, the fandom will lose its appeal.

The heroine has double standards and is too hypocritical. She cannot understand that the heroine and her mother plotted against Narcissa's father in order to conceal the heroine's identity and pretended to be Lucius's illegitimate daughter. This behavior really hurt Narcissa's happy marriage, but she did not feel wrong at all. In her heart, she hoped that her illegitimate daughter could be loved by Narcissa, and After Draco got together, they lived in another manor and never apologized to Narcissa. Narcissa's originally happy marriage became a joke among others because of the plot of the heroine's mother. In the end, the family broke up, her husband cheated on her, and she had to raise an illegitimate daughter, and her heart became extreme. Finally, after the heroine's identity was revealed, Narcissa was even raped by her relatives. Blaming is not good for the heroine. Regardless of whether the heroine is of the blood of her own sisters, as long as the heroine is an illegitimate daughter, Narcissa has no obligation to be good to her. In the end, her son was snatched away by the heroine, and Draco did not understand his mother's pain. The heroine and Draco lived alone in a manor and were happy and happy, while Narcissa's originally happy family was shattered. After becoming famous, the heroine finally devoted herself to improving the status of witches, hoping that they would have the right to inherit the family and be freed from housework. Narcissa, who had been hurt by her, turned a blind eye at this time. Could it be that because the heroine was not a real illegitimate daughter, the pain that had brought Narcissa to her marriage and heart was gone.

The otaku fighting stories disguised as fan fiction are full of poor otaku fighting skills. I think the author could have stopped writing them. This is a Harry Potter fan fiction. It would be more reasonable to move the whole story to an ancient world and remove all the settings of the magical world. My impression of the heroine is that she is a very hard-working but incompetent person. She always makes up for things afterward instead of thinking carefully beforehand. For those of you who are jumping to read, here are some of the minefields I have summarized, so let's sort them out for everyone. Point 1: There is no blood magic, and genealogy records are unprecedented. The Black family tree automatically records new births, but the Malfoy family tree does not. The poor life experience of the heroine written by the author simply cannot be established in the world view of the original work. Point 2: As an adult time traveler who knows her own life experience, the heroine hopes to get Lucius's father's love. Knowing that Lucius didn't care about her, Narcissa didn't want her outstanding heroine to not hide her clumsiness, but to contribute various money-making ideas, just like the unfavored daughter in a nerd novel trying to please her father. Point 3: The heroine is sometimes clever, she never defends others, she just passively fights back. After the heroine returned to Black, Pansy and Millicent attacked the heroine. The heroine looked like I had expected it, but in fact the final result was that her own hair was dyed yellow-green and could not be washed out for a month. Millicent was hit by a swelling curse, and Pansy was unscathed. Point 4: The heroine is suspected of having Stockholm Syndrome, and the author xp "If I love you, I will bully you." Draco, the male protagonist, and the female protagonist have no sense of cliché. Point 5: Not following the original work and substituting the house fighting setting is the so-called separation of families and a different life. After being together with Draco, he would not return to Malfoy Manor and not see Narcissa and Lucius. This is simply impossible in the worldview of the original book, as the heir to the Malfoy family. Draco couldn't do this. Point 6: The heroine cares too much about fame instead of pursuing power. Voldemort was the product of a love potion, but when he was in power, would anyone dare to say anything to his face? The heroine is very concerned about her reputation, but she is unable to prepare everything and can only make up for it afterwards.

It's pretty cool, but I haven't commented yet. . . But the story of Sasa and Xiaolong is still very interesting

Does the author need to explain that much? I'm here to read the novel. I am not looking at the analysis and analysis of the original novel. I seriously doubt that the author is trying to make up the word count. This is meant to be fan fiction. It would have been another story. Do you still need the author to explain so much of the original content? ?

Overall it's okay, there are no typos, the language is quite humorous, and the relationship is relatively slow to warm up, but I always feel that the male and female protagonists are not a good match. I will continue to add comments after finishing the overall review.

As a fan of both the movie and original works of the "Harry Potter" series, I think the author's large-scale writing is really in line with my taste. In the author's articles, I also saw many small details that I didn't pay attention to when I watched the original movies. In this article, it's like seeing another version of "Harry Potter" The protagonist of this article is Desa. I think the author's writing is more attractive than most fan fictions I have seen written by authors, and the foreshadowing is very good. I think the author is very powerful when he can write a fan fiction to more than a thousand chapters. Similarly, the author's extras are also very well written, which allows me to see different possibilities. The plot of this article is like Wumeng Mountain connected to the mountains outside the mountain, one section after another, very continuous, and some plots are also very exciting, super recommended.