
The Time Travel of the Carp Spirit
综穿之鲤鱼精的时空旅行
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- Completed
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- 3.6M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction Romance
- Subgenre
- Classics Fanfiction
- Updated
- 19d ago
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- Qimao
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This article is not bad, I can read it in the book shortage. What I like better is that there are not so many dialogues that affect listening to the book, but there are few words for me to guess if I can't read it. When I read the book, there are many commas, which made me think about it for a second after reading!
The author should work on his writing and literary skills. The choice of words and sentences is very verbose. The same thing is repeated over and over again, and the description is repeated over and over again. It is super verbose.
You can read it when I'm short of books, mainly because I haven't finished it yet.
The writing is a bit poor, the same thing is written over and over again throughout the page. He is very colloquial and likes to use sentences like "XX, yes it is XX" to make his narration look like a confession. The heroine's design is not good either. There are also people in other novels who are disgusted with being big, fat, orange and ugly, but there are ways to resolve the objection. The author wrote the dislike so carefully, and the heroine is a koi spirit. I thought that the heroine also used small magic to deceive the emperor. In the end, the heroine was cursing in her heart while trying to please the emperor. In the end, the only person who was disgusted by the novel was me. He despises Shen Meizhuang for being brainless, and ends up pretending to be like Qi Erha, who is not very smart at all. A lot of mental activities appear to be 2.8 Meters, but the actual performance is still 250. The author's idea is good, but his writing ability cannot support it, so when he assigns the character, it seems unusually "white"
The first world has more than 500 chapters, and it keeps reminiscing about the original owner and Zhen Huan, which is a bit superficial. For example: It's already over 60 chapters, but I still read it as the first chapter, because it's all the same, ugh The heroine's name seems a bit uninspiring: Jin Jinhong I keep following the plot, but nothing has changed. The heroine is tied up and can't do this, and can't move that. This world is too long, I can't hold on