Alluring Evening Makeup

The characters are not three-dimensional, and it feels like the male and female protagonists are like strangers, without feeling at all, and you can't get it. Most of the words are in the narrative, forcing emotional lines. More importantly, the background of the story and the corresponding events are too Mary Sue. As a prisoner of war, you can have stories with various important figures in the enemy country all day long. Don't you think it is a halo of the protagonist? ?

I feel like there is a problem with the logic. I say that the heroine did not know that she was pregnant and was eager to escape from the hero. However, the miscarriage was ultimately the heroine's fault. She made poor judgment and fell into other people's dramas and caused the accident. How can she blame others? I feel that the author did not want to follow the rules and write like other novels, such as the male protagonist abusing the female protagonist. Then it led to a miscarriage, but I wanted to find another way to find a sad point to write about, so I started from the heroine, but after reading it, I felt that the heroine was not worthy of sympathy. At first, I portrayed the heroine as righteous and courageous, and expected the heroine to be more of a female general. At least she is not this kind of beautiful woman who pretends to be dignified and can't even do martial arts. I'm quite disappointed.