This Marriage Was Supposed to Be Fake—Why Is the Pop Queen Falling for Me?

The plot is good, but the writing isn't so great. There are quite a few typos, and some word choices are inappropriate, making it easy to misunderstand on the first read. With some improvements, it will definitely be a pleasant and enjoyable read.

The theme is old-fashioned, but the plot is original. Successful character development The plot develops smoothly Not melodramatic, not ridiculous, not outrageous The reader is very comfortable. Novels have deeper meaning. The visuals are also great. Good writing style ⊙▽⊙ And then the romantic development is very appealing.

To be honest, it's terrible. The romance scenes were a complete mess, a common problem in online novels. This novel focuses primarily on the romance, with other aspects only mentioned briefly. This should give you an idea of ​​how rare and wonderful the plot is. So let's not comment on this part of the plot. After all, controlling one's temper is not easy. Then there's the writing style.

The plot is good, with many twists and turns, but there are quite a few typos, and the male lead isn't very smart. As someone who mainly reads male-oriented novels, I can use it to read more books.

Aside from a few typos, it doesn't affect the reading experience. The theme is novel, and this is the first time I've ever been so captivated by a male-oriented novel. I just want to see more interaction between the male and female leads; I really want to see them kissing (just kidding).

The author's positive values ​​showed me the equal footing of men and women in pursuing love. The author enriched the plot, making the relationship more intimate and believable, unlike some novels where the protagonist is instantly smitten the next day after a wedding. I think the author's values ​​regarding love are very positive.

The theme is clichéd but popular, and I can accept the absurdities of the premise—after all, novels are meant to be enjoyable. However, could you please clarify the height differences between the male and female leads? I can accept the female lead being taller than the male lead, but could you please stop the constant shifts in height—one minute she's wearing heels and taller than him, the next she's naturally taller?

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The beginning was okay, but the main character started to break character later on, and the writing was sometimes not very good. The writing style was a bit poor, and the sentences were not very smooth. That's my honest opinion.

He's a musician, and his wife, whom he married in a flash, is a national goddess. If no one told him, wouldn't he know? Two people in the same industry, how could they keep it a secret for so long? With her popularity, her music app must have featured her. Speechless. I've never read such a terrible novel.