Douluo V: From the Start, Spurned by Yu Xiaogang, I Become a Master

Knowing the plot involves kung fu but not verifying its effects, you immediately kneel before the master. With your business acumen, the only person you can contact is the city lord. You dare threaten the city lord during negotiations and even seek out the Spirit Hall.

It doesn't steal opportunities, doesn't torment the protagonist, and is a self-righteous hypocrite who can barely protect himself; the plot logic is flawed. Soul beasts can't become gods, yet a rabbit can become a killing god on its own. There's also the heavily injured Tang Hao who keeps showing off and surviving. Knowing the plot, it still gives the third character time to develop. Without a system, it's still incredibly arrogant and useless.

He said he wouldn't fawn over the Three Kingdoms at first, but then he went and did anyway. What use are the Seven Devils without the Immortal Herb and the Sea God's help? You've already dealt with Bibi Dong and Qian Daoliu. Why bother training a bunch of useless people? Just say you'll help if you come, or get lost. That's a testament to the truth.

So clever, such a sycophant, doesn't he hold back any cards? If he weren't the protagonist, he'd probably die countless times.

The protagonist is too saintly.

Wow, someone who can write something this awesome is truly talented.

Writing like this is truly a masterpiece.

The plot started to lose its appeal from Shrek Academy onwards.

It looks so good! Try not to make it too exaggerated; a more realistic approach would be even better.

It's so good! So good! So good! I need more updates! I need more updates! I need more updates!