Borrowing Yin Bones, Wife of the King of Hell

Each story has a lot of foreshadowing at the beginning, but the ending is unclear, and then it immediately connects to the next story. Overall, the plot is incomplete and the holes cannot be filled. For example, the story of the house spent so much time talking about the 18 levels of hell, but in the end the ancestral hall was destroyed and the story ended. Grandma Xiaotang could enter the haunted house, so why didn't she find her son? When they killed the Holy Son, both Ruyi and Wuji were offline? The story of the annihilation of the Du family was not told what happened to the corpse.

The main plot of the defense novel is to improve your strength and then take revenge. It's a bunch of useless and messy plots. It's still a bitch. No wonder no one reads it.

The first few chapters are really attractive, but as I read on, I wonder who the protagonist is. Are you thinking too much? The plot is also dragging. The more I watch, the less I want to continue reading. The writing is average. If you don't know how to write, I suggest that the next AI help you write and polish it.

Newcomers, please run. I have read more than 500 chapters. Many of the plots written by the author have no beginning and end, and the writing style is also very poor. I can't relate to it at all. I have forgotten many of the plots I wrote and can't follow them at all. The book is called Borrowed Yin Bone, The Wife of the King of Hell. Is this Yin Bone borrowed? I feel like maybe the protagonist is the reincarnation of the King of Hell. Anyway, the writing is so bad that I really can't stand it anymore.

The destruction of the Du family in this book is considered a big chapter. It is the solo show of the protagonist. The opponents are all Kalami. Jumping two-thirds does not affect the subsequent reading. Meeting Uncle Lu and trapping the pig's feet a few times is quite interesting. The author will update it quickly.

Where is the wife of the King of Hell? The writing is completely irrelevant.

I have read Chapter 662 of this book. How should I put it? Firstly, the whole plot seems to have too much foreshadowing. The author may have forgotten what he wrote in the past. For example, the saint behind Shumen suddenly changed to the Presbyterian Church in the later part. What happened to Zhu Zicheng of the Zhu family in Surabaya? What is the secret treasure passed down from the Fu family and Xiaotang's family? Secondly, the story line is unclear, and the details and ending of the story are not very good. For example, the chapter of the Eighteenth Level of Hell in the Haunted House is poorly written, and Xiaotang's grandmother and Xiaotang can freely enter and leave the haunted house without finding Xiaotang's parents. Why, there is no further story after the fight between Wuji and Ruyi in the killing of Zhuzi, who is the mysterious old man inside when the dragon's breath of the He family is disordered, and the whereabouts of Du Tianfu's Corpse Pill are no longer mentioned. The secret technique that the protagonist learned from Pengwazi Zhuzi is almost never mentioned, and the secret technique of the underworld is not mentioned at all. Continuing on how to practice (but the sword of the five-bone old man is often used to chop sauce haha), the Sanqingzhou Fengshui Association feels that it is not worth mentioning in front of Shumen, but why can it suppress the evil Shumen with the help of Xie Baizhi alone? Thirdly, too many typos will have a certain impact on reading. In short, the story line unfolds a lot, and the protagonist's buff bonus is very enjoyable to read (pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger). I give this book a perfect score of three out of five for readability. I hope the author will not disappoint us readers with the above issues, and I hope there will be a result.

Really good

It's a formulaic product, but the author's writing style is too poor, and the characterization of the protagonist's character is very problematic. He also wants to describe an enthusiastic young man who hides his secrets and is bent on revenge, and he also wants to write a poor-mouthed male protagonist who quarrels with others and leads his younger brother to fight monsters and level up. Do you have to combine the characters of other people's books into a reply? The main plot is revenge, and the world view is supplemented by the dialogue between "little brother". I don't read much of this kind of modern urban fantasy, but this book is really average. It should be protected from lightning.

Not good in every aspect. It feels like I'm looking at a scratch paper