After the Devoted Second Male Lead Asked to Marry Me, the Plot Fell Apart

After reading it, all I can say is, "What a mess!" The initial premise was interesting, but it became increasingly perfunctory as it went on. The last chapter, in particular, was absurd; it felt like they just threw together a random ending because they didn't want to write anymore. While it seemed like they planted many foreshadowing elements along the way, none of them were ever resolved. The little light ball, the black cat, the twins, and the ape-like twins weren't even mentioned at the end. If you see this comment, don't read this story. The ending is that the female lead is killed by the female supporting character, and then it takes the male lead six hundred years to finally resurrect her, and that's the end. It's too ridiculous, I'm impressed. The female lead's cultivation was also completely useless. I really love this male and female lead setup! Are there any similar stories I can read? I give up, author! Can you please compensate me for my one night?

Awesome!

Keep it up! ✪ω✪

It's a failed project, don't even look at it.

It looks good, but it's too short.

I'm so angry! It started strong but ended weakly. The beginning was quite good, but the ending was so rushed. The beginning slowly explained how the female lead reached the Golden Core stage, but in the last few chapters, she died inexplicably, and the male lead inexplicably became the Heavenly Dao. Many foreshadowing and mysteries were not explained clearly. It's ridiculous!

The beginning is captivating, and although it gets a bit bland later on, it's still readable. The romantic relationship between the male and female leads is both obvious and subtle, yet it subtly reveals their love for each other. It requires careful observation to fully appreciate. The daily, heartwarming storyline is clear, and the pacing is decent, but many things remain unresolved. The ending feels rushed (I hope they can add some extra chapters to fill in the gaps). Overall, it feels like the author is narrating a story from a very long time ago. In short, I've already witnessed enough from my omniscient perspective; the rest is their unique story.

It's good to read, and the plot is quite original, but there are many plot holes left unfilled, such as who the little halo is, who has the fragments of the Myriad Worlds Mirror and how they are used, the female lead's cultivation level, and so on. The ending also feels a bit rushed.

The plot was alright, but the ending was terrible.

The more I look at it, the more ordinary it seems.