Pursue Good Luck and Avoid Bad Luck, Starting with Princess Shang

After reading it, I actually felt that it was quite good. The whole story was quite smooth and had no negative points. But there are still some small suggestions that can be improved. 1. The realm is a bit confusing. At the beginning, the realm up to innate is mentioned, but later there are some realms after innate. But what is a bit contradictory is that the protagonist can know what the next realm is, but the reader does not. In the article, the realm before innate is It was introduced at the beginning, but everything after the innateness is that the protagonist suddenly knows what the subsequent realm is called when he is about to make a breakthrough. I think you can understand the division of the subsequent realm through other people's mouths. When you reach the peak of the division, you can then find someone to understand the follow-up. Otherwise, the sudden appearance of a new realm will seem a bit abrupt. 2. It feels a bit short. In fact, I think I can write something longer, such as suppressing the Holy Land and the follow-up with Princess Baozhu, suppressing or subduing the forces of the Confucian Academy, etc., Or even make it longer and write an infinite flow, and directly open a map to go to the outer starry sky. Anyway, thanks for accompanying me and looking forward to the new book! 😋 Recommendation index:⭐⭐⭐⭐

It's a bit interesting. It's an ancient demon slayer article that's been popular recently. The pig's trotters have a lottery, which gives several choices every time there is danger or opportunity. There are already "additional DLC" "energy absorption and monster killing upgrade system"🌝.

How should I put it, Jiangjiang is still the same Jiangjiang. An experienced driver on Akina Mountain, he can always drive at a speed of 180km/h anywhere.

This book is a harem novel and the car travels very fast

The one thing that is a little bit poisonous is Song Wei. He is a hungry ghost. He is committing a crime at the scene. Did he ask the protagonist to wait outside with someone else? The first time he was at the scene with the criminal and he didn't know if he was the murderer, so he was not afraid of being killed. The second time was about the fishing gang. Did he ask so many people to wait outside? The third one is that he danced like that and had no background. How could he dance like this and not know where he would die? It is a failure to write a character like this. Other places are okay.

Not bad, keep up the good work, highly recommended!

The protagonist is almost invincible for just a few days. It's not that the protagonist is invincible, but that Song Wei is always there to pick up girls and sleep with them. The protagonist is treated like a passerby.

What is written at the end? It's a bad ending.

Come on, author, I've given all my votes to you

The plot is exciting, the rhythm is tight, and the characters are clearly described.