Urban Dragon

Well, how can I put it, my feeling after reading it is just average, but many plots in the article are not finished, such as Zhang's father's identity, the relationship between various families and Zhang's father are not finished, and the foreshadowing in the article is not revealed, such as what the arrangements in Zhang's father's mouth are. This makes me feel that I am writing the novel to the end in a hurry. Summary: Bad ending! (My literary talent is not good. If you don't understand the previous part, just read the summary!)

Rotten! Rotten! Rotten! It's so nonsense. I didn't read it until I finished reading it. It was said that the Zhou family and the Zhang family were evenly matched. The Qin family was still an old local family in Yin City. How could they not know about the Zhang family, and how could they still name the small Zhang family? I felt a little uncomfortable watching it all day. Also, the protagonist Zhang Ran is also trash created by the author. He is too trash, so the auction and the fight against the Zhou family heir should be tougher. Is this a female channel? Is the male protagonist written by a female channel? It's also a cool article. My sister doesn't know what a cool article is. I can read more cool articles written by others. It's really uncomfortable to read. I thought it was a cool article but turned out to be a constipation article.

The male protagonist has no masculinity at all, he is just a Ninja Turtle. To return this virtue to the heir of the family is laughable.

I think I might as well change the title of the book and call it "Look How I Achieve the Endurance of the Turtle!"

Setting up a conflict was originally an exciting development, but in order to slow down the pace, it was not fun, and even overturned my previous setting. The most important thing is that I obtained absolute money and status at the same time. I did not try to crush him, but chose to be a licker and a clown. Then the key point came. The classic female channel flavor. Conflicts cannot be said, misunderstandings must be made, there will always be new misunderstandings, and there will always be a mistake. Appetizing

At first, she looked down on the protagonist because he had no money, but then he said he couldn't beat Zhou Kai. After the fight, Zhou Kai said he couldn't beat the Zhou family. Is this woman just going against the male protagonist all day long? Every time I watch it, I feel like I have no emotions at all. How can I forgive this turtle male protagonist? I can't stand it anymore. The Qin family can invest 100 million yuan, and her brother is a playboy, and her mother is like a shrew. Is this reasonable? Such a family fortune should be given to such a brainless mother? Would a man with such good looks choose to marry such a brainless woman? After seeing Zhou Kai enter, the heroine has not yet firmly believed in following the turtle male protagonist, and runs over to make trouble for the male protagonist. She misses the past every day, and I really can't stand it anymore. I will be choked to death if I continue to watch.

It sucks. This ending is really nothing to say.

The pillar at the door is so dirty that it's like a licking dog. The male protagonist can come to work in front of my house.

I feel like I can still write it down

It looks good, but it sucks.