Fairy Gallbladder

I don't understand why the editor wanted to write Brother Pigfoot and Chu to death. He wrote him to death before his parents even appeared. It seems that the story can't be continued without writing all the relatives of Pigfoot to death. I thought that Pigfoot would help Chu and his brother when they grow up. How can they help when people are dead? Also, Chunmei's role is too small. Why doesn't Pigfoot take her to practice? He couldn't bear to see the pig's feet when his elder brother and Chu were dead.

The writing is really messy. Pig's feet have no intelligence at all. It's so weird for a time traveler to travel through time. In Chapter 72, he clearly had a trump card and didn't use it, but he still had to receive three palms. What kind of pig brain is this? If it weren't for the pig's feet, this situation would be a dead end.

He is too violent and handles things recklessly. In addition to killing, he still kills. There are some things that don't require killing, but he still kills. He also kills for big things. He calls it "you messed with me". It's not that you can't kill, it's just that it would be better to be merciful and spare others, and the people reading the book would be in a better mood. Killing so many people, author, are you a pervert?

When will his brother come out? ? ? ! ! ! !

It looks good. Can you update it faster?

The first part is pretty good, but the second part is like shit. It keeps trying to level up. Don't you know that if you don't advance in martial arts, you will retreat? You've always been timid, so why don't you practice martial arts? It's better to go home and plant sweet potatoes. It's really better to give your place to Gu's eldest son. You'd be fine as a horse breeder.

The author is going to stop updating. He will update one page every day, and then update it every two or three days.

The updates are too slow, as slow as a snail, and the writing is so-so.

Very good

This novel is one of the few good works that I have seen in recent years. It has ups and downs in the early stage, and the foreshadowing is filled in the later stage. It can be said that the beginning and the middle process are very good, but the ending is a bit flawed. It will be better if you continue to write! Also, this book has no emotional drama and no heroine.