Kill Herzog in the Beginning of Dragon Clan

The writing is really not that good, the writing is very poor, it looks messy, it's really rubbish in a fanfic, and the image of the protagonist is not very good either, it's pretty rubbish anyway.

It doesn't look good. The further you look at it, the more you look at it, you feel that the protagonist is of no use, and the plot has nothing new. The protagonist doesn't know anything. Ada is fighting with others on the street. The protagonist, as the head of the Orange family, has spent several days without knowing how to say that he is the boss of the underworld. Is the information tortured and not circulated? Didn't the news report this gun battle?

The writing in the front is a bit messy, but the writing in the back is very enjoyable, and the pitfalls are buried well. After the protagonist becomes the parent, the writing starts to be exciting, and there is basically no poisonous point.

The ending is a bit rushed