Apocalypse Mom Isn't a Saint: Stockpiling Supplies in Her Pocket Dimension to Raise Her Kids

After reading half of it, I gave up on the article. The subject matter is good, so I have been asking to read it, but the author's literary skills are too poor, the description is dry and unvivid, and there are a lot of grammatical errors and typos in the sentences. It can be used as material for elementary school students to correct bad sentences.

There are so few comments. But it's really beautiful, the subject matter is quite novel, and the writing is also good.

The article is average

The plot is pretty good, but there are a lot of typos, additions and omissions, so you have to guess. Some characters disappear as soon as they are written, even if there is no simple explanation, like the child with high fever who was abandoned by his father. He was adopted at first when he was told to carry it, but after he was carried the next day, there was no follow-up. The same is true for Wang Yu, the three people walking together, they just mentioned that they met an acquaintance while doing hard work, and there was no follow-up. I hope the author still has a beginning and an end when writing these marginal characters.

For those who are more serious, don't forget Huo Huo yourself. I seriously suspect that the author fell asleep while writing the article. There are so many typos! This is the one with the most typos I've read.

It's really good. I've read novels for many years and rarely get to the end. I've read this one to the end and I still want to read it.

The author's writing style needs to be improved. There are many mistakes and omissions in the novel. I am tired of reading it.

There are some problems with the writing, redundancy, grammar, typos, and some minor logical inconsistencies, but ignoring these is still a good subject matter. The well-behaved child and the strong and calm mother, the mutual support between the two women, continue to watch!

Very average. I quit after watching it.

There are many typos, many sentences are not fluent, there are many inconsistencies, and many descriptions of psychology or psychological activities seem too deliberate. I don't know whether the name "Hong Kong Independence Base" at the end is intentional or not. Although it is an understatement, it is still difficult not to pay attention to it.