One Person, One Cat and One Sword, Walking on the Path to Immortality

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A traditional and refreshing article about cultivating immortals, Li Changsheng is so handsome and awesome! ! After provoking Li Changsheng, the major families were destined to disappear in the long river of history.

I like this title, it's very attractive, I love it.

The plot doesn't have much ups and downs. The protagonist's standard system upgrade flow, secret realms, encounters, and villains are all very standard upgrade flow frameworks. As far as I can see, the chapters don't have any bad points, but the plot is also very bland, and the motivation to continue reading is not very high.

Ruthless, selfish, the male protagonist forced himself to pretend that the cat was dead and let the North die. After seeing this, I couldn't stand it anymore. I don't know what the purpose of writing this scene is, but I still feel angry when I look at it. He is a despicable villain.

The system is incompetent, the protagonist is the Virgin, the plot is long-winded and has no highlights, an alternative pretense story, show off your cultivation before fighting? Isn't it for killing people? Just do it, what are you doing there?

Before reaching the 50th chapter, you can read it as a cool article, but after that, it won't work. The plot is very messy, so I gave up the book. Why can the Mortal Cultivation of Immortals be successful? That's because his opponent is not stupid and is full of calculations. A person who has lived for dozens or hundreds of years is not as mentally intelligent as a little kid???

Li Changsheng's golden finger is a bit special, but don't worry about it, just make it easy to use.

Is it too much for the author to write a time traveler like this? In the beginning, he had an orange cat turn into a cat lady to warm his bed, but later he ended his relationship without even seeing his fiancée? Was it a self-inflicted wound? ? If you really don't want to write about a female protagonist, at least find another excuse. There is no genocide or property confiscation. Second, there is no blood feud. It's too hard to write. Why

It was the cat who attacked the soldier first, and it was normal for the cat to die as a result. The bishop killed all those people, speechless😓😓😓Don't look at it, it's so ugly