A Spirit Spring in My Pocket: Raising Kids Made Me Rich and Famous

Personally, I think it's okay. The male protagonist is the God of War general of Daqi and the eldest son of the crown prince. The male protagonist's father has always only had a side concubine in his eyes. He doted on his concubine and destroyed his wife. In the end, he rebelled and was sentenced to death... The female protagonist did not have the virgin's own wood power and 🈳time, which saved the male protagonist and his mother. During the relationship, the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist. Later, the male protagonist went to the battlefield and separated six years later to meet in the capital... The ending was quite hasty and ended with flowers...

It ends too quickly

I couldn't figure out whether the fourth child was a boy or a girl. One moment he said he was not a little fairy because he was fat. The next moment he said he was the fourth brother. Who was Manman?

Listening to Chapter 44 of the novel, how many brothers and sisters do the heroine have in her family? The heroine, the second brother, the third brother, and the fourth sister, right? Why do we sometimes talk about five brothers and sisters? The house the heroine's family built was outrageous, and dozens of people came! Are you going to build a community?

It looks good, but the ending is too sloppy

The ending is a bit rushed

There are really a lot of typos, and how many younger siblings does the heroine have? One moment there are three younger siblings, and the next there is a family of five. I really can't stand it.

Good-looking, not cluttered, and refreshing

Generally

There are many typos, many words are wrong, and the plot does not flow smoothly.