Doupo: After Three Years of Sweeping the Yunlan Sect, I Am Invincible

The writing is too far-fetched. Xiao Yan was forcibly reduced in intelligence and changed his character. Logically speaking, Xiao Yan should not be that kind of person. He held a grudge because he didn't get the crystal. For the sake of the plot, he was forced to change Speechless and kept being demonized. Ten Dou Zun descended on the Yunlan Sect. I wonder how the Ancient Clan could really value Xiao Yan so much. The original plot was going to be fucked to death. Even the Soul Palace came, and not a single hair of the Ancient Clan was seen.

Don't read this book with your brain in mind, otherwise you will have the pleasure of having your IQ raped 😂

I can only say that the plot is really disappointing. Logically speaking, Xiao Yan should not have this kind of character, and you have already changed it. Then Xiaoyan will kill you and let you go every time, all kinds of things. Do you understand what it means to be invincible in the God's Domain for 10 seconds and you can't kill a single Xiao Yan? Are you kidding me? This is forced to drag it out for the sake of word count. To bring down wisdom,

I don't understand why these fan writers can't move when they see a woman? Also, is it really necessary to publish this kind of novel that strictly follows the plot of the original novel? Finally, you have to steal everything from the original protagonist, so why don't you order something of your own? The rewards given by that system are so easy and numerous. How many of them can arrange it to appear in the end?

I can only say it's rubbish. Brother, this is a sweeping system. You don't even sweep for a few days before you go out and wander around. It's almost used as a decoration... There are sweeping rewards in the first few episodes, but all the rest are based on stealing opportunities from others. So why do you still need this system? I really don't know what the author is thinking, and for this kind of novel, it still gets 9 points

Dou Zong is still afraid of a million-strong army

Let's not talk about the quality of the writing. The state of mind is completely wrong. In the first two times, I was fighting for three stars of spirit, and later I was fighting for two stars of spirit. How did you manage to tell lies with your eyes open?

The writing is messy, so messy

What kind of invincible realm is it written about? It can't be banned even with all your strength, it can be killed in one second, it can also make people run away, and it can be tied up casually during a struggle? It's not that, just like this, he can still be beaten by Dou Huang, that's too useless, Shui Wen

Xiao Yan's demonic transformation is already very toxic. If you also demonically change the plot, you will just write other novels under the guise of Fighting to Break the Sphere. The plot is even more messy, with various subtitles and sometimes the dialogue feels weird, like humans and machines talking to each other.