Dream of the Red Chamber: The Jia Family's Abandoned Son

The ideas are novel and the details are not handled well. But in ancient times, if you offended the emperor and still didn't think of a way to replace him, you would end up with no good end sooner or later.

The plot is confusing. Very poor sense of logic. No sense of logic. Words come together. Emotional quotient and IQ may not be very good. Many things cannot be scrutinized. Since you know she is the daughter of another prince, why do you want to marry her? Isn't this asking for death? The emperor can tolerate it. All previous explanations were disrupted. Are you afraid you grew up in Notre Dame? What is it that is written down? I just like reading books written by idiots like you. I can't understand the advanced mathematics. Most of the classical Chinese texts. Ha ha ha ha!

This is the first fanfic of Red Mansions that I have read, and I have never read the original novel of Red Mansions. Let me tell you my opinion. As someone who has never read the original work, it is quite novel, but there are many shortcomings. 1. The author may have installed a pre-travel setting of the King of War and God of War in order to make the protagonist feel awesome. It is really embarrassing. The second book is more like a court book, but the power struggle in the court is very low-level, and the behavior of many characters is inexplicable. For example, the emperor arranged a marriage for the princess and the protagonist, and the protagonist said in front of the undercover that he wanted to rebel. In the end, he didn't rebel. He chose to rather know that the emperor was going to mess with him or to be a dog. I'm speechless.

There are a lot of useless plots that have nothing to do with Dream of Red Mansions. The author should write traditional ancient time travel stories instead of withdrawing from Dream of Red Mansions. When I saw Lin Daiyu being kidnapped, I felt numb.

If you don't understand it, just write a fanfic properly. It's okay to add so many new plots, and just pay back so much nonsense. If you don't want to follow the plot of the Red Chamber, you can write about other themes, such as traveling through the era of imperial power, or troubled times. Why hang up a red building and get sprayed? Especially the setting of a super soldier king makes me want to laugh when I look at it. Haha, it's better to just get a special physique or just get natural power. When I see the Super Soldier King, I always think of some embarrassing foot-picking plots.

The plot is confusing and the logic doesn't make sense. The relationship between the characters is confusing. One moment, it is said that Mrs. Liu is his mother, and the other moment, Mrs. Zhao is taken back to Lixiangyuan. Mrs. Zhao is obviously the mother of Tanchun and Jia Huan, right?

The first ten chapters are okay, and the logical thinking is okay, but the following chapters are just mindless writing. I feel that the writing in the latter part is very random and made up.

Generally speaking, I don't have that feeling.

Coming from Notre Dame, I didn't have much to say. I started to introduce that before time travel, I fought for my life on the battlefield in the wind and rain, and after time travel, I fought for my life on the battlefield again. Why do you still act like a virgin? When you meet a woman, you make all kinds of compromises and don't care about your own affairs. I really don't understand. There is no mention of how good the relationship with Lin Daiyu is, and she can give in even if she is threatened. Just die, I'm not your wife, I'm just a cheap cousin. You can still be threatened and let everyone know that you have a lot of weaknesses. What a holy mother!

Not a bad start! Parallel imports will begin in the mid-term! Both of them can talk for several chapters!