Perfect World: From the Start, I Sign In with the Primordial Azure Dragon Physique

There are too many typos and then there are the early relationships. Since you don't want to break up, don't be so ambiguous. It's really ambiguous over and over again and I say it to Huang. Although I also want Huang and Huo Ling'er to be together, it's pointless if you do it like this. I didn't read what happened next. It doesn't matter.

It's all a slap in the face! No matter where you go, you will find trouble! ! To be honest, I think there is something wrong with such a protagonist! "For example, if I go to a tourist attraction supermarket in the city, will there be one?" Only what happens! For example, homeless people stink! Only passers-by will have opinions. "So this kind of stinky protagonist's character is really ugly. It's really ugly.

It's so long-winded. I've settled in an illusion, but I'm still slowly looking for flaws even though I know it's an illusion. I'd probably have been beaten to death by evil spirits outside. I'm speechless.

If it were a perfect world in anime, what would those Immortal Kings be if you added an Ancient Holy Body to Emperor Huang Tian?

What is this thing written? Apart from seizing opportunities, it's just pretentious. It doesn't have the domineering power of a guardian brother. After reading more than ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist himself is not as domineering as Emperor Huang Tian in the original book. Since you have traveled through time, you should write something different. I don't ask you to surpass it. At least don't lower the grade. Why does this thing get such a high score?

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It's too messy, it's mixed into other books, there are many typos, it's simply garbage.

From the first few chapters, the book has gone off-topic, and the author has written too much. Just fantasize about it yourself.

It's disgusting to write all the protagonists as passers-by

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