Douluo Dalu: A God-Tier Martial Soul, Bibi Dong Takes Me as Her Disciple

What can I say? It's just average. The protagonist written by the author doesn't show any maturity at all. He is as childish as a child. This is not like time travel. Secondly, the soul king killing the soul saint is too outrageous. You have to cheat the protagonist. How can you get through so many paragraphs when you have nothing to do except giving a martial soul? Everyone knows the combat power after reading the original work. It's impossible to hit the martial soul's avatar without using other soul skills and just attack with basic attacks. It's strange that the god-level martial soul given here can beat it. Once it's hit, it's gone. To put it bluntly, you cheat the protagonist, but it's the same as if it's not activated. It's outrageous to write its combat power so high. If you cheat even more, it doesn't feel outrageous.

I wasted more than an hour. The more I think about it, the angrier I get. I didn't even log in, so I logged in specifically to give you a bad review.

It's really disgusting, even more disgusting than Tang San. He stole other people's things, killed his granddaughter, and in the end they couldn't touch him. How could there be such a disgusting person, and he also traveled through time, with such no distinction between right and wrong, I can't stand it.

Yes, I finished it in 3 days. The plot is good, the main character is well written, and the relationship between the characters is also well handled. However, the finale is too hasty, and it ends in a hurry. The finale is not as detailed as some subplots. I hope there will be a sequel.

What I hate most about writing a fanfic is that the protagonist is a hesitant and hesitant character, and the protagonist is both responsible and independent.

This protagonist is pretty good

Author, have you never seen Douluo? Normally speaking, after absorbing two soul rings, his level will be at least level 25. After absorbing two soul rings, he will still be level 22. How is this possible? Are you pushing this level too hard? You really only absorbed the soul rings, not any soul power. He is still a god-level martial soul. How can this be so? Is his cultivation speed a bit too slow? A god-level martial soul only increases by four levels in one year.

This is a terrible book. The author has never read Douluo Dalu, yet he dares to write a Douluo fanfic.

Fortunately, I have not read Douluo Dalu, but I only briefly understood the names of the characters in the book Douluo Dalu. Therefore, this book is still good without too many conflicts. For this type of novel, the author has written it very well. It has been well received.

I don't have a clear mind or have no brains. I still admire Dean Shrek. If nothing else, saying that he doesn't dare to cause trouble is mediocre proves that it is unreasonable for this person to live so long and not die yet. He is still an old licker. He looks down on Yan and says that others are lickers. Has this changed? I didn't go to Shrek to go to Wuhun Palace because normal people tend to cater to readers, right? In fact, the author is just a dog-licking fan of Tang San. There is no good thing in Shrek except Zhu Zhuqing, who is relatively normal. He wants to cater to the readers but can't let go of his dog-licking heart to lick Shrek. It's disgusting.