Douluo's Dark Demon and Evil God

How should I put it? It's a relatively alternative fanfic. In some aspects, it's more like Douluo Dalu than the original work. It's still worth a look. The intrigues of the clans and other things cannot be seen in the original work.

I'm really speechless after that. I have to write about Bibi Dong being naked and being looked at by Qian Jixun. If you play like this, don't blame me for giving you a bad review.

Forced cheating, subversion, some chapters look very awkward, the protagonist is always messing up when doing things

The first few chapters were okay, but the rest were completely useless.

Enough

As a whole, although it is not fascinating, the writing is interesting. Compared with other fan fictions, this is already a good novel. I hope the author will continue to make further progress and write more interesting novels.

It's really watery. Even if you try to absorb hundreds of years of innate level 20, you're still drunk. After writing two chapters of Devouring Soul Rings, you still haven't reached the level of a thousand-year soul ring. Bye bye, it was written by a classmate from elementary school.

Although the first part is good, the second part is a bit confusing. When you killed the tiger, it was already equipped with soul bones. It is only reasonable that this set of soul bones should be used to absorb the soul bones of the Demon Crystal King.

He wanted to hide his identity while deliberately exposing his poison, and he didn't even know what he was doing.

It's the same as history. The author wrote it completely nonsense and the timeline is completely wrong. I don't understand why you're writing a Mao fan even if the timeline doesn't match up.