I Really Want to Return

As an invincible novel, it is indeed very enjoyable, but the harem is too open, and even when it is clear that there is a wife, it is still merciful. If you don't like harem novels, it is best to avoid lightning.

When I saw Chapter 381, it was a harem story. A harem opened after 200. Every month at the end of the month, I traveled through the movie world. In the movie world, the male protagonist wanted to die and acted like a fool. As the plot slowly progressed, the male protagonist stopped acting like a fool and began to practice real practice. The male protagonist slowly advanced and had something to control the world. I found it boring later and stopped watching it.

The plot at the beginning was really interesting, but it started to get sick halfway through. Although the theme is suicide, at least don't write it so brainlessly. In the early stage, you were decisive in killing, but in the middle of writing, you started to get sick and start to feel a bit like a virgin. As for Xiang Fei in the plot, no matter what he said, he verbally insulted the protagonist to steal his wife, and even started to kill the protagonist. His intention was so obvious. At this time, the protagonist began to overflow with the Virgin Heart, but it trapped him, and everyone knew that he was right. Fang's ability is very dangerous, and he is mentally disturbed. As a result, he lost his life. This is in the real world. The meaning of this part of the plot is really unclear. There is also the following plot, brainless delivery. If others want to study you, just study you and don't resist. Just show it off. If you think the plot is not easy to write, then slowly write it from the low martial arts world to the high martial arts world, the world of immortality, and the world of gods and demons. It is better than being in the world of ghosts and monsters without brains. The plot that goes through the ghost world is really too shocking.

It looks good, even if it's a bit off from time to time, but it's still good 😃

After reading it, please comment. This book mainly tells the story of the protagonist Han Luo who travels through various worlds after being bound to the system, such as Death Comes, Fox Demon Matchmaker, King Kong, etc. In these worlds, he meets different heroines or friends. The system gives him abilities or skills. In the end, the protagonist masters several avenues and discovers the truth of the matter. The truth is that Han Luo is actually a part of the soul of the villain Ouyang Qing. Because Ouyang Qing wanted to step into the realm above the saint, he sent many parts of the soul into various worlds. Let them each become the pinnacle of strength in each world, and then devour them. Quantitative changes lead to qualitative changes, and they step into the realm above the saints. The system is actually transformed by half of the soul of Ouyang Qing's apprentice Lin Qingxue. Normally, half of the soul is in Lin Qingxue's body. The system only exists when traveling with the protagonist. As for the other half of Lin Qingxue's soul, we will talk about it later. Because Ouyang Qing wants to devour Lin Qingxue, and Lin Qingxue happened to like the protagonist before, and after witnessing Ouyang Qing devour the protagonist, restart the world. In the 99th time, I came up with this method. In the real world, the heroine Lin Yirou is half of Lin Qingxue's soul. After the protagonist saw through Ouyang Qing's plan, he turned against the guest and swallowed Ouyang Qing. After that, the protagonist used the Avenue of Time to pick his parents and Lin Qingxue back from the timeline. After that, the hero and the heroine stayed together happily. It ended. Personally, I feel that this book is well written. I don't know why some people still say it is not good-looking. I don't know if they didn't read it carefully or something. But I feel it's pretty good and worth watching

Do you have to keep contacting women? All women in all worlds need to be related to the protagonist, right? You describe the protagonist as someone who has no interest in things between men and women, but you have to make those women have feelings for the protagonist.

At first I thought it was just a leisure and entertainment book where the main character fishes and travels around the world, but the ending really shocked me. The plot is interesting and not too long-winded, and there is nothing overwhelming about the background. The writing is good and worth reading.

I have read novels that were not finished too hastily.

I really like this novel. The plot is coherent and the various pitfalls are filled in very well. Really like this book

Dude, your novel is already useless after more than 30% of the time. . . How to put it, arrange for one person to constantly provoke the protagonist and take advantage of the situation. . . And when he uses a killing move on the protagonist, the protagonist still wants to let the opponent go, and never fatally injures the opponent. The protagonist still behaves so weakly, and even arranges for him to kill the protagonist's life. . . Only then does the protagonist explode, thus accelerating the plot and allowing the heroine to win over the hero quickly. . . But what you wrote was really abrupt and bad? Does the substitution start from here?