Marvel’s Twelve Talismans

This book was updated at a certain point a few years ago. I paid to read it at that time, but I didn't expect it to be moved to Qimao now. It's a bit uncomfortable🤣. But I read it again for a while, and it reminded me of the mask period. I couldn't go anywhere, so I just waited for updates at home every night. During the day, I discussed and urged updates in the author group. I still miss it a bit.

Um, not quite. Always overturning your own settings and dying of laughter. The most awesome thing is that the protagonist can use darts to shoot bullets. When encountering a robber, he is afraid of this or that and just doesn't dare to take action. I laughed. Bullets can fly away so fast. How can you hit a living person who doesn't move accurately?

The content is boring and the setting is confusing ①. When the protagonist's system is not activated, Gu Yi summoned the shadow ninja from the shadow kingdom and was not found? The Shadow Kingdom in the Shadow World (Shadow Dimension) ② Or is it that when the protagonist's system was not activated, the tattoo of the Kingdom of Shadows did not affect the protagonist's character at all? Such as personality changes, indifference, etc. ③. When the protagonist was shot for being a ninja, he lamented that it was unsafe without the ability to travel through the Shadow Kingdom, but then he went to steal the Iron Overlord's nuclear reactor in the blink of an eye? Did Spider-Man just get the same ability? ④. If you enter the shadow world without ninja protection, will you be attacked by other shadow creatures indiscriminately? ⑤. How can the body odor of Caucasians be accepted by the protagonist of the American cookbook so calmly? Don't say that readers should make up their own minds. Why don't you tell the platform, "A book title has millions of words, and the content is all up to the readers themselves, and then let the platform pay you"?

The writing is pretty good, but some aspects are not very good. 1. There are many typos, which affects reading. 2. The heroine Mis is obviously studying in the same university as the protagonist, but suddenly she is in another university. 3. The setting of the twelve talismans is infinitely powerful. It mainly depends on how strong the user's physique is. You have weakened it a bit here. Don't you even care about the setting? The Nine Ghost Generals are also somewhat weakened. 4. If you want to write multiple female protagonists without foreshadowing, it would feel weird if a female protagonist suddenly appears, okay? And the emotional line is not obvious, overall it is good, I can give four stars (female protagonist: self-created character Misty, original character Felicia (Black Cat), Wanda (Scarlet Witch)

As far as the attributes of Shadow Kingdom are concerned, it's impossible for Gu Yi not to find you. And that girlfriend is absolutely necessary? If you must, write it for your father in such a way that you can be as annoying as you want, and it will basically just be a Spider-Man plot and have nothing to do with Marvel.

I have one thing to say, you are not in Marvel, you are always in Spider-Man to gain records, it is boring

It's rubbish to the extreme. The Black Shadow Corps is just used to store money. What's the point of having the Corps change clothes the whole time?

Fortunately, there are no big pitfalls.

It's a bit off topic. The Twelve Talismans were promised, but they didn't play much in the book. The Shadow Legion contains more content than the Twelve Talismans. It's better to change the name to Marvel and get the Shadow Legion at the beginning. The main character is not well written, and it feels like a passerby.

It's still pretty good, but the pace feels a little faster. The plot is good, but I can't get into it. I didn't expect that about charging the rabbit charm. There are details, but not much. It's worth a look.