Transformed into an Immortal

After three hundred chapters, it felt very confusing. Many plots developed very quickly, and many plots felt inexplicable. I don't like it very much

Overall, it's pretty good to watch, but the heroine is sometimes too generous. She didn't understand a lot of common knowledge about cultivating immortals in the early stage, and some plots have some incomprehensible logic bugs. But the main plot is quite interesting, but I haven't finished it yet. I've only written the upper part. I hope the author can improve and continue to write the lower part.

This book, how should I put it, the author wanted to write about a ten-year-old, but he always wrote about the person as a 22-year-old. The names throughout the article, and the names throughout the article in one paragraph, for example, Shuang Ning ate Shuang Ning and thought it tasted good, and Shuang Ning wanted to eat another one, Shuang Ning this and that, I really feel like I didn't pass the composition when I was studying. Then there is the feeling, starting from when I was 9 years old. When I first met the master, I walked through the pool and my clothes got wet. The master looked at it and felt it was unnatural. I was 9 years old. What was unnatural?