Dou Po: the Opening Auction of Qinglian Earth Core Fire

The plot is good, but it's too studly. I don't care if you fall in love with two or three, but it's really boring to see one fall in love with the other. You said the system gave you three, but you're not satisfied yet. Yafei, Medusa, Yun Yun, Gu Xuan'er, they even have love for their own disciples. I thought it looked pretty good at first, but after seeing the auction end, I went to find a new woman.

Mo Gai Dou Po had nothing to say. The other women snatched them away, but they actually snatched Xun'er too. This was the woman who had been following Xiao Yan until he grew up. I originally thought the plot was fast and interesting, but when I saw that Xun'er actually left Xiao Yan, I skipped them all and wanted to see more. There is no future Emperor Yan. If Xun'er is the kind of person who forgets his original intention when he sees sex, he will not talk to Xiao Yan long ago when the original work turned into a waste. According to the setting in the original work, Xun'er is not such a person. If you touch other women, forget it. If you touch Xun'er, you will offend the public.

I think if the author hadn't kept emphasizing the distinction between master and servant, I think I could still finish it even if it was a mess! But this is what makes me most speechless. Author, since you want to emphasize the distinction between master and servant so much, then the system should reward men or not have them? Even if I fall in love with my own woman, I am convinced that I keep emphasizing the distinction between master and servant with my own woman! I jumped directly to the wedding chapter, hey! It's grossing me out! What is a servant? He is not worthy of entering into marriage with his master. Oh! Accepted. Luckily I jumped to watch it. Otherwise I will be sick to death😓😓😓😓

Let's not talk about anything else, what about earth-level fighting skills? In those sects, are there two or three in each? Yunlan Sect doesn't have earth-level fighting skills, but Yun Yun still uses Xuan-level fighting skills. Let's read the original work, can you take a closer look? Also, if you sell strange fire, you sell it for gold coins, right? And there are so few? Which good person can exchange gold coins? Aren't they all exchanged for treasures from heaven and earth? It can also be seen that the author's writing style is really bad, but it's not too serious, but when you read it, you will have a feeling that it doesn't connect well, which makes people feel uncomfortable.

If you are good at it, practice more. If you are not good at it, practice more. If you can't afford to lose, don't write about the past. The past is the past and the present is now. If you always think of the past, you will be good at it now.

There are all kinds of wits in the article. I admire myself for being able to read more than fifty chapters. Basically, those who read the fanfic must have read the original work, but the writing of this fanfic is outrageous. There are all kinds of wits, inconsistent settings, confusing timelines, black Xiao Yan, etc. It's really disrespectful to the original work. The Yunlan Sect can do ground-level fighting skills that are not rare. The last intermediate level fighting skills were auctioned for 10 million, and then Qinglian Earth Core Fire was sold for 24 million, which is outrageous. Then after the auction in the auction house, everyone who takes the auction will read out their names, and there is no privacy. Not only can people in the cubicle know who they see each other, but even those on the first floor can see who is auctioning in the cubicle... The character settings and plot timeline are all messed up... Then when Yun Yun met the protagonist for the first time, she blushed and became shy because of her appearance, and then her heart was pounding... It was a complete downfall. And like a stallion, the female subordinates given by the system are all ready to be fucked. The Soul Palace clearly knew that Furukawa had auctioned off the Qinglian Earth Core Fire, and it had not been refined for more than a year, so it just didn't take action against Furukawa. The Soul Palace was really good. Then he started to describe Xiao Yan's viciousness. Xiao Yan's three views were not bad, it was unnecessary and it didn't have much to do with it. The system's auction system can only be used for auctions. After opening the mall, you can only sell it yourself, but you can't use it or learn it... The timing is also confusing. When Xiao Yan first met the Little Medical Fairy, he already had a background in Canaan College. For the sake of word count, I write a lot of nonsense, teaching small people a lesson, etc. For the sake of word count, outsiders clearly know that the protagonist's subordinates are very fierce, and even the King of Fighters and the like dare to attack the protagonist. Then he took a Dou Zun man to the desert and couldn't find the Qinglian Earth Core Fire. He said that he could only find it by hiring a local mercenary group to find the Qinglian Earth Core Fire... Many things in the article are illogical, and to be honest, it's a bit uncomfortable to read. And the author's handwriting is really that of a primary school student.

Keep repeating some words, I feel like the author has lost his mind a bit

Speaking of which, it's still pretty good-looking.

Rubbish, not to mention the avatar's self-destruction, but also the slander of Xiao Yan, not to mention the fact that the auction stream dares to take action against customers, it can only be said to be true rubbish

All I can say is. Waste. Clearly powerful. You also have to talk down to some newbies. Not cool at all.