Immortality Martial Arts: I Rely on Luck to Add Points

Why do I really want the protagonist to be beaten to death or maimed, talking about being a slave while jumping around crazily to death, and still living forever but being put to death, sandwiched between a man and a woman, even a man can't stand this kind of brother! You don't love someone but you still want to provoke them. Want to prove your charm?

The early stage is okay, but in the mid stage, you are not stubborn, but a pervert, wretched and courageless. Upgrading the level is the same as not upgrading. If you are at the innate level, you can compete with the innate late stage. After two levels, you will also be in the innate late stage, but you will not dare to fight with the innate late stage. You are practicing at a rubbish level.

It would be really good if Han Dong wasn't there in the early stage, so you can check it out in Shuhuang. The protagonist feels love-struck, and there are many conflicts in the later stages, which makes the story unfinished.

The protagonist, Madonna, is both a dishonest and a promiscuous woman. Talk about Han Dong every day and add a dog. Even though he is immortal, he still goes around rescuing people, as if he has no luck without a woman by his side. What does the author think of the reader? He writes like this. What kind of mentality does he write about an immortal being as a Virgin with a dog? Is he a slut and a loser? Is his low-key style in the early stage a dog? Ever since Han Dong was written ✍🏻, it's been the same as 💩, rubbish! ! ! !

I can't stand it after reading Chapter 70. The protagonist is afraid of trouble so he should not be a shift leader and find a place to retire. There are always troubles, so forget it if you cause troubles. Others will have to wipe your own troubles. He transferred the trouble to others, and said like a holy mother that after repaying the favor, it had nothing to do with him. If it weren't for the protagonist, others wouldn't have caused such trouble. How can there be clear grievances, and others will suffer for the trouble he caused.

Generally speaking, the male protagonist is not a coward, but a coward. He can't do anything well. It's useless and meaningless if his realm is improved. There is zero emotional drama. It's not that the author didn't write it, but he wrote a little bit. It's like shitting on the grass. It's too glaring and useless. Maybe the author's writing style is relatively raw. It's not a big problem. Just wait for the author to grow up.

I can only say that the plot is rich, but in the later stage, for the sake of numbers, I played a good hand of cards to pieces. It was really in vain. Bad review.

Very good time travel story

The early stage was fine. After the protagonist breaks through the innateness, he feels that the innateness is too much. Why can the protagonist do trouble in the capital without being discovered? , On the contrary, the higher the level, the more cowardly you are. Once you break through Tianxuan, you should at least raise your hand to suppress other Tianxuan!

It's just a bad book. I imitated someone else's Gou Dao Wen. In the early stage, it turned out to be a Gou Dao Wen. A dog that licks a dog, Gou Dao still causes trouble everywhere.