The Banner of the Gryphon: A Tale of Mount & Blade

For me, the downfall is the system, which feels a bit immersive. I would like to give you a suggestion. The subject of riding and cutting is a good one. You can write about the protagonist going through war, trade, and territorial construction. From being an exiled minor nobleman or establishing a family, he gradually develops and grows, replaces him, becomes the master of the kingdom, and then conquers other countries to unify the continent step by step. In fact, there is a lot that can be written about strategy, love, and the life of a medieval aristocrat.

Nice looking but really verbose

It's a bit long-winded and can't be said in one sentence, but it's still good to skip these questions.

Very good, although some parts are a bit wordy

Chapter 9, pirates, disgusting people

Fanfic of Pander's Prophecy mod 1 The writing style is actually average. It is a running account. The biggest problem is procrastination and everything is too detailed. Although I thank the author for his patient introduction, it is obvious that there are problems with the rhythm and arrangement of interesting points, and it is unattractive. The sincerity of the code can be seen between the lines. Give your attitude an encouragement and praise it.

From beginning to end, this book always surprises me in unexpected places. The story in it can be described as "ups and downs". The protagonist deceives his opponent in a few words and actions. It is also very important that it does not end unfinished.

It is very well written and requires readers to have a certain amount of historical, cultural and social experience to read it.

Except for the verbose writing, everything else is pretty good.

A very nice book, extraordinary. Physical book level