Reborn as a Phoenix, the Female Phoenix Next Door Wants to Break My Balls

After reading more than 200 chapters, it seemed smooth in the early stage, but when I read chapter 150, it started to feel a little,, how should I put it, weird. The villain seemed like a fool without thinking, and the protagonist had a bright halo. Everywhere he goes he is belittled as a villain. Overall, the article is quite humorous and the fighting scenes are described in great detail.

I don't understand whether this is about a phoenix or a person. It's about a phoenix, but the logic of the behavior is all human. Also, as a clan leader, he always considers the so-called big clan. He is bullied and still tolerates it. He can't even deal with the people below. How can he be the clan leader? The writing is also ridiculous. Most of the elders are the opposite. How did he become the clan leader?

The part about the Tianxuan Realm was very well written. I really enjoyed reading it. Why did the writing become like shit after I arrived in the Eastern Region? It was a bad batch and abandoned.

The leader of the Huofeng Clan is the most powerful in the whole clan. He can't even suppress the great elder, and he still lets the great elder do it. This thing is so arrogant that I am speechless. What novel? Is it a forced plot just to show off?

I have finished reading this book, and my evaluation is a piece of shit. It is written in a mess, and it is not true. Some people write it and then disappear. And your story line is pure and pure. If I can write a novel at this level, I feel that I am in junior high school. I can only say that it is pure and pure.

The front part is pretty good and pretty good-looking, but the back part is a stretch. It's suitable for reading when you're in a book shortage, but forget it at other times.

The writing is okay, but there are too many typos

Bah

There are a lot of typos, but that doesn't matter. The logic is confusing. The first few hundred chapters are instructive. Some of the characters in the middle suddenly disappear. The character settings are gone. The rest of the writing is difficult to describe.

As mentioned before, you are so powerful. When you become a clan leader, and then your wife is poisoned and your children are also poisoned, there will be no follow-up? Even the enemy in the Treasure Pavilion can open it. What you worked so hard to defeat is just going to be taken away and used? Or give it to the person who poisoned your wife and children? It's really 666