The Fifth Generation of Konoha Village Was Booked by Me

The subject matter of this novel is well chosen, and the plot is okay. The only pity is that the writing method is not mastered. It's always a combination of narrative and discussion. This is a novel, not an argumentative essay. Every chapter is devoted to the main character's thoughts. The plot is fundamental. If you don't understand clearly, let me explain it to you in detail. When the protagonist reaches out his hand, you have to discuss why he extends his hand, what is the significance of his extending his hand, what are the consequences of his extending his hand, who has extended his hand, and even what he was thinking when he stretched out his hand. For example, when the protagonist drinks a cup of tea, you will habitually write where the cup of tea comes from. How is it transported? How much is it worth? How did you get it? Wait, wait, wait, to put it bluntly, there are too many asides, and the plot is full of water! ! !

Especially water, especially after learning the art of Flying Thunder God for a long time, aren't you worried? Just plant it directly. I have to say that it is so difficult to practice, what kind of reaction speed is required, what kind of things are required. If you plant it directly, it will be over. This kind of novel will affect your IQ! There are only two kinds of novels in Qidian. One is a book written by a great master, and the other is so watery that I wish I could write two chapters in one sentence!

What can I say? There are too many words to analyze the plot. Although I read it after it was finished, I can still feel the despair of chasing this book when it was serialized. I can't say it is watery. 1.9 Million words will give you at least 500,000 words to analyze the plot why you should do it, who should be considered, and how to do it. It has been there all the time. Analyze for readers, but what we want to promote the plot is to look at the differences between the plot and the original work. You can keep analyzing this and that. Don't analyze all the key points at the end of the chapter. Feed the readers, we can eat for ourselves. Less analysis can improve the perception a lot.

The plug-ins are confusing and unclear, and there are inexplicable seeds and so on... Can't we just add some more? My own strength is not bad, I am 13 years old, a pseudo jounin, but you write that I am like a weak chicken, he is a genius ninja, and he has no reputation... The timeline is confusing... Just write Kakuzu, Haruka Kakuzu, but I have to write Akatsuki Kakuzu. Is there an Akatsuki organization at this time? The most important thing is that the character is hypocritical... The friendly smile, the friendly smile... Repeatedly mentioned... Imitation of the Yondaime character makes people want to vomit...

It's a bit messy at the back. It feels like rushing to the end.

I can give you an example of the author's writing situation. For example, I was hungry and ate an apple. In such a sentence, what the author wrote is "My stomach was a little weak because I hadn't eaten for a long time. I went to the refrigerator to get an apple because I was too lazy to cook, and this apple was very red and big. The vitamin C and dietary fiber in apples are enough to maintain the energy needed by the body. I don't have to wash the dishes. It's like killing two birds with one stone." There are only less than a dozen sentences and a few hundred words for the plot in one chapter, but there are several paragraphs for the explanation of some useless plots. Although there is no problem with the meaning, it is like reading a lot of nonsense, and it does not focus on the description of the scene. The interpretation of the plot keeps extending, which looks too watery. But the author's setting is quite interesting, and I still recommend it. If you want to read it, I would like to give you a suggestion: after reading the beginning of a chapter, skip to the end. The plot in the middle is basically dispensable, just go through it quickly.

This book is no longer written like a Naruto novel. That is to say, there is no conspiracy of Naruto, and there is no passion of Naruto.

Masashi Kishimoto doesn't understand Naruto, and you, the author, don't understand even more, right?

There is a big problem with the protagonist's combat power. If he doesn't have much chakra, he can use Sage Mode. The prerequisite for Sage Mode is that he has a lot of chakra. The protagonist can fight Minato back and forth. Not to mention how much combat power Minato has exerted, the protagonist becomes a flying thunder god and becomes an immortal. In human mode, at least his strength is above that of an elite jounin. When facing Sarutobi Hiruzen, it is written that Sasuke from the seventh class faces Orochimaru. Is Sarutobi Hiruzen a super shadow-level player? Or does he have any outstanding record? If he faces the protagonist like this, can he beat Minato in seconds? Moreover, the protagonist is in Sage mode and has the flying thunder god. Without further ado, he should be able to reach the top ten combat powers of Konoha. He is already as powerful as a licking dog. He licks Hiruzen Sarutobi. Are you the dog of Hiruzen Sarutobi? There are already plug-ins. The protagonist can hang up Hiruzen Sarutobi and beat him even if he takes off time for a year and a half.

Well enough