Legend of the Ninja World, Five Years Since Signing in Konoha

Chaos, the realm is chaotic, I originally thought it was an invincible text, but it turned out that Kaleidoscope, Burning Fruit, and Immortal Human Body are the only way to become a jounin. You said that you want to fuse and you can't do it in one step, but I can't bear it. It turns out that with your strength, you can defeat the Raikage.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I finally couldn't stand it anymore. The author is really 6. The sea in the Naruto world is connected to the world of Pirates, and the universe of the Pirates world is connected to the world of Dragon Ball. The writing is really messy. I can only read it in the early stage. However, the combat power in the early stage is also messy. I can beat the Fourth Raikage. Although it is due to the speed advantage, I am rated as a jounin.

The rhythm control is not very good, the thinking and logic are a bit messy, I have no desire to read, and overall the writing is very poor.

Everything is self-centered. Don't you know that even the young Omoi doesn't have a black-spotted thunder? You are just a female brat who imitates without any brain.

The writing is so disgusting, one sentence here and one sentence here and there, the preface and the follower are inconsistent.

A long-winded word. Long-windedness is the most poisonous point in the novel! The second one is the contradiction in the character setting of the protagonist. He wants to be rewarded with growth by signing in to the system, but he is still worried even though he knows the plot clearly! The descriptions of the mentality of many characters are also very contradictory.

Later people don't need to read it.

In order to give a bad review, I had to scrape together enough time to comment.

A lump

The writing is extremely confusing and the reading experience is very poor. There are also problems with the characterization.