Xianlu Xianxiu

I used to follow the series on Dianjia, but then I stopped subscribing every day because of my work. I saw the later stages and then forgot about it. Then I suddenly saw the finished series on Maomao🐱, and I didn't have to spend the money later. It's good, and the writing is quite smooth. Compared to the traditional cultivation novels written by Ribo Xishan, it can be said that this is a book that can be read. At least the writing style is not novice. There are a few books on the list that are too novice. The golden finger is a huge villain and the villain has a super low IQ. This one is not so cheesy and can be read.

Jiang Zhiwen, more than 40 chapters, the heroine and her sister were assassinated without seeing the use of talismans or formation disks. They only used a sword. They did not take any elixirs when they escaped. The blood kept flowing. The heroine had been fed before, indicating that there were elixirs, but she did not take them and even fainted. The article also said that there are no high-level monsters in the mountains. What is a golden elixir if it is not a high-level monster? The heroine was 5 years old when she practiced Qi at the first level and was led around by her sister.

Hey, I'm speechless. The heroine of this book is Shi Xian, right? How do you feel that the heroine has been changed when you write it in front of me? ! At this time, Shi Xing looks more like the heroine than the heroine. I don't know how to write this. The heroine is like a transparent person. Besides, do the heroine and Shi Xing have to stick together? I know it is a good relationship, but there is no need to stick together all the time. I am really speechless! ! ! I think this heroine is not as good as Shi Xingdang... I don't know what will happen next. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore after seeing more than a hundred pictures.

I'm really impressed. A female supporting character has more opportunities than the female protagonist, and the description of the female supporting character is more detailed than that of the female protagonist. The female supporting character appears a lot more times than the female protagonist. After more than 100 chapters, what does the female protagonist get? The author really has no priorities. If you really want to write about a female supporting character, just write that she is the female protagonist. Your writing like this has no other meaning than disgusting readers. Anyway, I was disgusted. I really don't understand how such a plot could exist. Bad review! Discourage!

It's okay. The non-CP heroine has no emotional line at all and is really a monastic. You would never have imagined that the Heavenly Way of the Yuan Realm would be Dixuan in the end😅

What is this going on? Is Shixian the heroine or Shixing the heroine? I have seen more than 160 chapters so far, and most of the chapter is devoted to Shixing... In the Ten Thousand Sects Grand Examination, Shixian Shixing didn't have any outstanding performance in the whole process. Well, he suddenly ranked third or fifth. If he enters a tower and can definitely get into the top ten, then why do he need to lay out so much content in the front? There is also the Daoji Liangyi swordsmanship, which Junyue Cangxie obtained inexplicably. Well, there was no special opportunity or specific conditions, and he just obtained the inherited swordsmanship of a Taoist master. After more than a hundred chapters, the heroine is not as clear as Shi Xingxing, and she is completely transparent. The heroine has a top-notch spiritual root, so her luck is pretty good, but in the end, all the luck came from Shi Xing. Let's talk about the encounters. First, Shixing was physically weak and couldn't go out before she was ten years old. There were reborn people who hated her, and then she encountered the ancient demon clan incident. She is a standard female protagonist in real novels. And what about the Ancient Demon Clan? Not Big Brother, tens of thousands of people participated in the Great Trial of Ten Thousand Sects, and thousands of people entered the Ancient Demon Battlefield. They were all low-level monks. The Ancient Demon Clan suddenly appeared so casually, and an Ancient Demon Clan suddenly appeared that could not even deal with the transformed gods. It was started without fully confirming whether there was an Ancient Demon Clan. Do you want those low-level monks to die? And a lot of it is devoted to popular science, I want to see the plot upgrade! This is not a popular science answer article!

It's so long-winded. There are countless narrations interspersed in one sentence of dialogue and then the answers. It looks very tiring.

Although it is very long-winded, I insisted on reading half of it because it is my favorite non-CP traditional immortality novel. The author's writing style is not bad, the characters are also good, and I can feel the author's sincerity. Unfortunately, there are more and more branches in the back, and the experience process is described too carefully. It can even start independently. I finally pulled it back, but ran away again after a while, alas.

A lot of nonsense

After reading more than ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore. It's so long-winded.