My Pokemon Are Not Quite Right

This pm fanfic is not as well written as the author's other book. It may be that I prefer fanfics set in the original pm world. Some characters may have original relationships, but the portrayal is average. The writing style feels a bit like a sudden change compared with the previous ones. At the beginning, the writing style looks like a fanfic called "The Elf Master", which needs to be evaluated later. Anyway, I recommend reading another book by the author.

There is no doubt that the book is definitely good-looking, but there are some shortcomings in my opinion. The author's description of the strength gap between elves is very vague. It feels that the protagonist is 50-50 with everyone, with a maximum of 28.

Compared to the author's next book, it's just so-so. It uses Pokémon themes, but it's not a Pm world view. I haven't found one that can compare with the leader.

Generally

Nice

Nice, not enough yet

I feel like vomiting when I see the system🤮

So-so

The writing is good, but there are too many pitfalls