Douluo: Save Zhang Lexuan at the Beginning

The plot is very boring and the characters are all dark. The main character is a good guy and a brainless Shrek. There is nothing exciting about it. The main character is always targeted by others within the rules and there is no way to do it. It is really disgusting.

Although some of the details are too brief, the writing is very good and at least many things are given reasonable explanations, which makes it feel more real. The original work makes you feel like it is all about the protagonist. This fanfic can score more than nine points.

You were writing in a jittery way. Many things you wrote were unclear, and you were too lazy when you wrote them.

It's rare to see a single heroine fanfic, at least I don't see much of it. It looks okay. As for whether Shrek is black or not, I can only say that the winner is king, history is written by the victor, and there are some things that don't need to be black ~ there are a lot of typos. The two ice and snow emperors did not appear in the later period after using the soul contract. In the end, they directly became immortals, which is a lot more awesome than the God King. The ending is a bit hasty. Overall it's pretty good, I think it's pretty good

The number of words is enough. But his plot is a bit lacking, so add some extras

Not very good

The plot is very good, but it's just a eunuch

Looks good, but looks like a eunuch