I Broke the Dimensional Wall in Lord of Mysteries

The beginning is very contradictory. First of all, the golden finger at the beginning blocks some advanced knowledge points, indicating that the golden finger is not anti-pollution, but the protagonist knows the title Lord of Mysteries, which is enough to be polluted; in addition, the protagonist is a time traveler and has read the original work, so he should have an understanding of most of the ways. Apart from anything else, at least the assassin should know that he can change his gender to a female, and the boy named Tris on the boat should also realize that he is the instigator. . . This opening is very poorly written and affects subsequent reading. At least I can't stand it anymore.

There are constant glitches in details

There is generally nothing wrong with the plot of this book, but there are still minor flaws in the details, which is understandable considering it is the author's first book.

You can really publish anything. . . . Mess

What did you write?

This is one of the few mysterious fanfics I've seen where the voice style matches the original work, and it's very comfortable to read.