Immortality Cultivation: I Can Use My Clansmen's Energy and Blood to Add Points

There is no priority. The plot is not compact enough. I couldn't understand it after watching it for a long time. It seems that everything is written, but none of it is the key point. For example, Goldfinger, which I wrote in the early stage, I think is pretty good. Later, when he advanced to the internal refining stage, he started refining elixirs. After refining elixirs, he came to draw talismans. After that, he wanted spiritual stones and joined the branch of Wandan Sect. Then Goldfinger was nowhere to be seen, either doing family chores or conquering towns. It doesn't seem to improve the strength of the tribe, it seems that forgetting the golden finger is the fundamental way.

Today's works are very much like those produced on an assembly line. The plots are long-winded, bland and full of nonsense, with no twists and turns and no climax, which is great!

A ten-year-old bookworm has tested the waters for you. The first 400 levels are still in order, but the rest have become the overlord of one party and have not yet broken through the mortal realm. I will not even introduce the realm. Maybe someone else will write it later. Water water water

Who is the protagonist? Isn't it the ancestor Changfeng? Didn't you see that ancestor Changfeng had a system? Those two commanders have never appeared. Has Changfeng ancestor not broken through yet? At least it's time to gather spirits

It's too verbose and the pace is too slow. There are too many numbers and I feel like a newbie.

Those who are attracted by the Qi and blood points can be dismissed. From the 180th chapter onwards, it seems that there is no such thing as a golden finger of Qi and blood points. From the successful breakthrough in blood training to the transformation into the mortal world, there is no description of the Qi and blood points. The protagonist encounters a bottleneck or something and then seclusion for half a year to achieve a breakthrough. , As if there is no such thing as qi and blood points, there is no description at all, I couldn't bear to read Chapter 205, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Although the protagonist did not successfully break through to the middle stage, he still cultivated to be 30% stronger than before, and there was no description of qi and blood points! Originally, I was attracted to read the book by the point of adding vitality and blood to the clan as described in the title and introduction of your book. You have directly eliminated the most attractive point. I am speechless.

I won't talk about the writing style, it's quite adequate for a web article. At least, the logic shouldn't contradict itself, right?

It's better than expected. I think this book is about 8 points or more. The pace of the plot is a bit slower than other books, but the plot is more reasonable. Other books have a fast pace but can easily cause high blood pressure. It's not an exaggeration to say how good it is, I just can watch it.

The word with the most words in the whole text may not be the name of the protagonist, but the two words "whisper" will definitely be the first☝

At the beginning of Chapter 400, the protagonist is gone