From Martial Arts to the World of Immortality

Let's talk about the plot. The protagonist's neighbor next door is a lame man. He is lazy and beats his wife every day. The protagonist likes his wife and watches her being beaten every day without caring. Later, people in the village said that the protagonist was having an affair with the lame man's wife, and then the lame man pointed at the protagonist and cursed him. The protagonist was already a top local expert and a gang leader.

Brainless plot, the virgin male protagonist either fights or pretends to be smart. Either the male protagonist looks for trouble or trouble comes to the door for various reasons.

I endured nausea and read Chapter 80 or 90, but I couldn't stand it any longer. The main character had an indescribable feeling of being pretentious. The writing style is also average.

To sum up, the protagonist, the Madonna, the thief, and the hypocrite are all inferior. If you don't believe it, you can read Chapter 72 and Chapter 73 first. They are very detailed and can push you further. What does the man of the house think when he gives more than ten kilograms of food to the neighbor's wife? The man of the house cannot be visited by others. He is a lame man. He is very old. He just wants to be a thief and gain fame.

I feel like the author is not very good at writing emotional dramas. It feels the same whether she has Wang Sunshi or not. Every time I see a plot with her, I feel weird. The other plots are okay, and the pace is inherently fast and slow. It's normal to not leave the Novice Village after Chapter 100. If you like fast-paced books, just look for fast-paced books. It is acceptable as long as it is not pure hydrology.

It is normal for other people to be hungry if they don't have time to force their wits down. You, a time traveler, have learned martial arts and don't know how to go to the mountains to get food? Rory! It's very boring to show off when the enemy has to take action when you can obviously strike first!

All the decent people in the book do not distinguish between black and white and take advantage of others' danger. The protagonist, the Madonna, is perverted and seeks death. If it weren't for the subject matter, it wouldn't be worth watching.

The character plot and setting are quite good. The early stage is exciting, and the middle stage is also good. However, in the later stage, I feel a little anxious and the rhythm is a bit chaotic.

The writing is quite good. I think it can be ranked in the top 20 on this platform. It is much better than many brainless villains who travel through the awakening system. There is also the male version of the female channel. The author has clear logic and is not sloppy. It is no worse than what is written by a great writer. The protagonist is also loyal and filial. I recommend it as a good book.

It was quite interesting at first, but later on the protagonist actually got together with an old widow who picked mushrooms. The protagonist was young, rich, talented and capable, but he had to make rags and rub everyone's facial features on the ground. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I abandoned the book and deleted it.