Dog-Headed Military Advisor

The plot is exciting and the heroine Su Yunxiu is unforgettable. The shortcomings are that it is too wordy, the plot advances slowly, and the writing is slightly poor. With no one reading, there is no motivation to continue writing, and it stops abruptly.

The plot is good, but too wordy. The writing is not very good either.

Dissuaded by ruthless verbosity

The Virgin Mary, the protagonist, has always emphasized decisiveness in killing, but when she killed Su Yunlong, another woman begged for mercy but refused to kill him several times rz

Come to an abrupt end

The writing is quite good, it feels like a story about mortals cultivating immortality, but why didn't I write it again?