The Days of Accompanying My Senior Sister to Cultivate Immortality

The front part is okay, but the writing is very sloppy and has no center at all. I write here and there, and the main plot clearly states that time is tight. The protagonist group is always shopping and doing chores. The battle is long and smelly, and it drags on as much as possible, but the plot is not exciting. I appreciate protagonists who don't mess around blindly, and I support the patience of each heroine in slowly building up her story, but the story is too boring and boring to write in a roundabout way, and it is also very illogical. It is obvious that everyone goes on a mission together, but two of them often desert to run branch plots, which is very unreasonable.

Overall it feels like poisonous weeds. Because it gets even more chaotic after chapter 500! Although there are many places where the preface does not match the postscript in the early stage, the main line of the story is still clear. After 500, it felt like a new outline was established, and then it started to be laid out again, and then it went back to the inconsistency before! In the later stages, I found that what I wrote was better than before, but I still felt that the author was editing while writing, but always forgot what he had compiled before. Then as I was writing, I remembered the previous plot, and I tried my best to make up for it!

The question is why Ye Chunqiu hasn't been fished out yet?

In other words, if it weren't for cooking, I would have forgotten that I came from time travel (at best, I can't tell, but at worst, it would be better not to write about time travel, and the plot will not show much later)

The author is very verbose, the pacing is very clumsy, and it is readable. The writing style is not particularly good, but it is not bad either.