Great Qin's Goucheng Land Immortal Was Exposed by the Gold List

This novel is very beautiful. First, the protagonist has a very distinct personality. He is not arrogant and domineering, nor is he complacent because of his cultivation. But if someone angers him, he will actively fight back. Don't cause trouble, don't cause trouble, but don't be afraid of trouble either. The second point is that the system does not appear very frequently. (This does not include Gou Shen and system rewards.) Both those who like systematic writing and those who don't like systematic writing should be able to accept it. The third point is that the author's writing style is good, the plot is exciting, vivid and the content is interesting. The fourth point is that the protagonist is a very talented person, but he also works very hard, and he works harder than almost anyone else. (This is very positive.) The fifth point is that the article has good intentions, is positive and uplifting. The protagonist's outlook on life is still very positive. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.

Author, at such a young age, you possess the talents of the world and the wisdom to stabilize the country. The ancients said that the crouching dragon and the phoenix chicks can unite and bring peace to the world; but today, bless my country, after 5,000 years of vicissitudes of life, there is a thunder on the ground, flying sand and stones, and a dance that confuses the sky. In the haze, I saw a golden-armored god standing between heaven and earth. This hero was holding two axes, his eyes were like lightning. With one axe, chaos began to bloom, with two axes, Nuwa created humans, and with three axes, Xiaosheng collapsed. It is a blessing to have such a great hero, and a blessing to the people. How can it not make people cry with joy? So when will you update?

A general who killed hundreds of thousands of soldiers was not only not punished but also upgraded to a land god. He exonerated himself of his sins and forgave himself after saying a lot of eloquent words. Haha, you are looking down on human life, right?

Very good setting. It's a pity that the writing is not good, it's a mess! The protagonist is too virginal and has too much nonsense! How stupid! Obviously he can kill with one sword, but every time he cuts off his arm first... It's inexplicable! The villain dies because he talks too much! Three enemies join forces and don't take medicine when they are injured? Get it almost to death and then break through? Too cliche and far-fetched

This book is quite satisfactory and okay, but the system is relatively transparent and has no sense of existence. If I hadn't mentioned it once or twice occasionally, I would have forgotten it 😂

The writing is beautiful. Come on.

When I saw Zhao Gao letting assassins into Xianyang, I felt that the author was not suitable for writing official plots. A guy like Zhao Gao, who has all the power in the world, has empty eyebrows, and has eight minds in his body. How can he do such a thing without even checking it? If you didn't do it well, you would have to be buried with the prince when he died. You deliberately let him go because you were afraid that he wouldn't die fast enough or that the ten clans weren't enough to kill him! Rewrite farming, becoming an official in the court is not suitable for you! !

Write a story about your community, right? There really aren't many people who can write about the national war well.

Save someone when you see them. Are you the Buddha who came down to earth to live in this world? The more you read, the more rubbish you see.

The further you get to the back, the more brainless the characters become and the more mixed the plot becomes.