Sign-In Begins with Shrouding the Heavens

As far as the writing style is concerned, it is imitated by Chen Dong, but the skill is insufficient and the imitation is specious. As for the plot? It basically applies the plot of Yuan. The protagonist changes from Ye Fan to the protagonist you made up. The so-called sign-in system is to turn Ye Fan's opportunity into yours through rewards or the process of signing in. There is nothing new. In this case, just read the original work. It is just a waste of my time to see you.

I have always liked reading novels of this type. But some of them are boring to read. The author's writing is really beautiful. I read it all in one go. There are indeed small flaws in the overall framework, but the flaws are not hidden. I support the author.

It was pretty good at first, but after teaming up with the Yaochi Saint, it turned out to be rubbish. If a woman likes the protagonist, she has to respond, and the protagonist is handsome from beginning to end. The Yaochi Saint has no feelings for the protagonist at the beginning, and she is completely attracted to the protagonist when she suppresses her contemporaries.

Seeing as you like smoking so much, don't mind giving you a bad review. I really can't bear to see you smoking while reading a novel, and you keep writing. Isn't it disgusting? Do you think others don't know you smoke your two taels of tar?

You can come up with such outrageous plots as smoking, and you keep describing it. I wish you could do it 5 or 6 times in one chapter. Some elementary school students also talk about smoking. Well, you are the only one in the group who has never stopped smoking. Are you proud of letting others smell second-hand smoke all the time? To be honest, I have nothing to say to people with this view. After all, they never consider others and never think about problems from other people's perspective. In the same way, when others do something they don't understand, it's terrible at this time. He will be like a mad dog, biting you and not letting go, and criticizing others from his so-called commanding heights.

The previous part about rejecting a rich woman made me click in. The middle part is a little bland, but overall it is a qualified and refreshing article, which is okay.

Personally I think it's just so-so

It seems like it was written by AI, not by humans.

If he smokes all the time, the author wouldn't think the protagonist is handsome when he smokes, right? You are already cultivating immortality, why don't you smoke?

Personally, I think the author's writing is very good👍 and it gives me a sense of immersion. The emotions change with the ups and downs of the plot. It's beautiful! I feel a bit like Chen Dongda, but I also have my own ingenuity out of style~