Sign-In Begins with Shrouding the Heavens

I like watching harems, but I don't know why people complain about harems when I mention them recently. I'm thinking that the original film Zhe Tian doesn't have a single female protagonist.

As expected, I hate smoking. When I see someone smoking, I want to walk away. Then I skipped the early part of the plot 🙂

After reading more than ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I can't stand wearing sunglasses, smoking, and talking dirty words inside.

I'm quite disgusted with the main character's smoking, and the endless description, so I've withdrawn it.

To be honest, what the book "Zhetian" requires is a heart that cannot be killed. Of course, it is not killing randomly for no reason. There are people in the world who slander me, bully me, insult me, laugh at me, underestimate me, belittle me, hate me, and lie to me. How should I deal with it? "One word, kill, don't kill, my mind is not clear. The emperor's road is fighting. The whole world is the enemy. One person can become the emperor in one life. Who can't be killed? Ye Fan will kill you if he blocks the road. It doesn't matter whether you are a ruthless person or who is behind it. Whoever provokes me will kill whoever! This is what I understand about the emperor's road and the invincible heart! As for the opportunity, it is not yours until it is in your hands." Some people may say that the ruthless person left it to Ye Fan. I want to say that the ruthless person put it there for Ye Fan. But you have to get it. Otherwise, wouldn't it be better to give it to Ye Fan directly? If you can't compete with your peers, how many times do you have the right to get it? In the original work, how many times has Ye Fan been hunted down to a life-or-death crisis? In the original work, even Ye Fan's son and the two sons of the Immortal Emperor have to die together. I haven't seen Ye Fan take action! Don't think too bad of me! Maybe some friends will say that I am cruel when they see this comment. But think about what kind of world is this? A world where people can eat people without death? In the real world, you feel comfortable when others scold you? If you are the Holy Mother, just pretend that I didn't say it!

I found that among all the Zhetian fanfics, none of the protagonists wanted to become an emperor.

I have only read the first chapters of this book. The most important thing is that the first impression is not good. The writing is not a big problem, but the details are uncomfortable. In the comments, many people are talking about the protagonist's smoking problem. In fact, I don't smoke either, but I don't have any opinion on people who smoke. As long as you don't smoke in public or affect others, it's your own business how much you smoke. However, the main character smoking in a fantasy world is very inconsistent in itself. In addition, many people do not smoke. If you suddenly smoke in a fantasy world, and the probability of it happening is quite frequent, it is impossible to ignore it. This makes many readers feel awkward and naturally have no desire to continue reading. I read a lot of comments saying that the writing in the back is quite good, but the first impression given to the readers at the front is not good. How can the readers continue reading? After all, the author is not a master and can make the readers read patiently. Most authors do not have the opportunity to make trial and error. Nowadays, there are too many novels and there are many choices. Readers read novels just to feel happy. If they feel a little uncomfortable, they may give up immediately. After all, even the Great God is no longer easy to use. If the author writes novels to make money, he should change the front part and make an announcement. At least many new readers will not run away just by leaving a comment. After all, novels are written for readers. If you make some changes, the performance of the novel will be better and the author's income will increase, so don't worry. Of course, if the author writes a novel just for his personal hobby, then it doesn't matter how he writes it. He can write whatever he feels comfortable with. The above is just my personal opinion. I hope the author will write better and better.

Is this person serious about his height of 179cm and weight of 56cm? Isn't this just pork ribs?

He is obviously a time traveler and has read the original work, but it turns out that he seems not to know many of the plots of the original work. Ye Fan's dragon horse in Kunlun was very surprised after seeing it. He also seemed not to know about the small world of Wu Shi on the Eternal Planet.

There's no need to step on it like this, right? Have a grudge against you? Use original work. A protagonist inserted into it. Not only do you play the protagonist of the original novel, but you also step on the pets around you. What do you really think you are?