Ninth Grade Jailer: He Actually Went on a Blind Date with the Leader of the Demon Cult at the Beginning

"My Wife Is Not a Monster" and "Da Feng's Watcher" are a bit inferior. Firstly, the writing style and typos are all minor faults. The main reason is that the plot layout is not good, there is no big foreshadowing, and the characterization of the characters is also not good. There is no feeling that makes people shine, it is just ordinary.

The background and plot are pretty good, although most of the plots are a bit cliche. I won't say whether the protagonist is a scumbag or not. Anyway, most of them are like this. I'm really speechless at his level. I skipped to more than 300 chapters, and when I saw his introduction, he was still a fucking fourth grade.

All kinds of novels are mixed together, it's messy and ugly

They all defended the country, and then they competed with a bunch of brats for the limelight. He said that the emperor will guard the country, but he will only guard the country and not be the emperor, right? If I become the Qing Emperor in the future, the peach blossoms will bloom, and you will be the emperor again in the next life, right? If you say you want to marry Qingyang, you are overthrowing it. If you don't overthrow Dayong, you are still marrying into the consort.

The main character is a dog

The author is very hypocritical. No matter who sees it, it makes me sick to death.

Overall, it's okay, and the plot is pretty exciting, but there are three things I still want to complain about. 1. The preface does not match the postscript. For example: In the previous article, "Star-Zhaing Tower" was still a hundred feet high, but in the following article it became Gao Baizhang (I don't know whether the author made a typo or the author thinks that a hundred feet is the same as a hundred feet.) When the protagonist reaches the fourth level of martial arts and upgrades to the third level, the gap in experience is still only 25 million, but later it becomes a gap of 200 to 300 million, which makes people speechless. 2. I can't understand that the protagonist actually forgave his mother and acted like a loving mother and a filial son. First of all, the protagonist is a time traveler, not the original owner. Can this emotion be substituted? Just recognize your parents? The most important thing is that the protagonist's mother gave up on the protagonist for no reason and took her daughter away. She didn't care about her son's life or death. She gave birth but didn't raise her. Can this be forgiven? What's the matter, now that you see your son has a promising future, you come back to recognize your son? In the same way, the father of the protagonist is not a good person. He bewitches his son and wants to take away the protagonist. How can such parents recognize this? Author, do you want to poison the readers? I don't know whether to say that the protagonist is kind or a virgin. Anyway, repaying evil with kindness is clearly played by the author.

I stopped watching the pig's trotters when I saw them in the capital. I don't know what to do with the pig's trotters all day long. Even though I have a golden finger, I don't even think about improving myself. I act like a little Karami. I can't stand it.

It's really a cross,,, the character of pig's feet is not good,, it's a bit licking,, and it's so good at watering,, this is the heroine too,,, or just start writing just one,, oh, it's boring,

Not to mention anything else, the third level can kill the protagonist's love interest of the fourth level. What do you think of this?