Lu Mingfei, the Martial Saint of the Dragon Clan

After reading Chapter 70, I stood up twice and kept saying, Master, I must practice martial arts well this time. A few people spend all day doing troubles and trivial matters. Strength is not mentioned. How about beating a few ordinary people and making them invincible? Although it was mentioned that "you can kill Mai if you fight to the death", but brother, you really ruined the template of Wu Sheng. After looking at the catalog, it seemed that I went to the academy within a few chapters, and I lost interest in reading it. I took the good embryo and carved it💩

It's a standard youth pain literature, wrapped in a dragon's shell. I originally thought it was a comical and refreshing novel, but it turns out that it's better than Jiangnan's old thieves, and it's the kind of knife with such subtle details that you can't tell if you don't look carefully. It's scary to think about it, and I'm really convinced.

I feel that the writing is really good, giving Xiaolu a new life and changing all regrets. 😊

It's a bit long-winded, and it gives me the feeling of being forced to write new words.

It's so long-winded, it's all just to make up for the word count. Many things are repeated several times, and they are constantly recalling this memory and that. There are also people who are no longer interested in Nono, and what about Eli Yi? She is originally the protagonist because of Nono's reasons, and her plot is arranged, but she is no longer interested in Nono and the plot is forced.

I feel that this book is quite well written, the characters are well drawn, and it has its own original characters. Some of the plots are also quite well written, such as the plot in Centralia, which I feel is quite good. I feel like the best thing written is probably the plot of Eri Yi, it's so sweet. Lu Mingfei's characterization is also very distinct. Although he is no longer the bad kid he was before, traces of his growth remain. Although there is no detailed plot of Kyushu, in his memories, you can still feel the waves and grandeur of that world.

Mainly, I keep reminiscing about the past, recalling one plot at a time.

The literary color has changed from mapping to storytelling. It is indeed a fan. The idea is too big, and the plot is foreshadowed but the recycled plot has no waves and lacks a climax, forcing the wonderful short and medium stories to become a long novel. No matter how similar the writing style is, it can't hide the vulgarity.

Maybe it's not suitable for me, it feels too wordy.

Why, I read Dragon Clan Tongwen to make up for my regrets, but what do I want when this book has so many regrets?