Fengming Douluo

My comment is for those who like to read Douluo fanfics. In fact, the biggest advantage of this book is that it is relatively slow to upgrade. Regardless of other novels with more than 200 chapters, they are all at least level 50 or 60. Especially those who tortured Tang San. I can't even stand it. 15 The 16-year-old Soul Emperor is too exaggerated. So I just want to say that whether it's the one who tortures Tang San, the one who licks Tang San, or the other Wuhun Party members. I really don't think that upgrade is too outrageous. Ok, if any friends read this comment and want to read other fanfics about one versus two fights. Dd under my comment. I can share with you whatever I think looks good. Can you tell me what my taste is like?

This is the author's first book. There may not be many loopholes in the previous photos before it is put on the shelves. After it is put on the shelves, it feels a bit like trying to make up for it. I write about the protagonist's memory before it slowly awakens. Looking back, I have to keep accepting the new settings. The description of Liu Erlong is a bit poisonous. He asked Boss Fei to help resolve the properties of the medicine and became a couple with Liu Erlong. In the process of taking the medicine, all of Liu Erlong's clothes turned to ashes after taking the medicine. The protagonists Oscar and Dai Laohu secretly saw Liu Erlong's body. Maybe I am too old-fashioned, but I feel it is a bit NTR. Then, the description of the heroine is okay, but the adjectives are really repetitive. After all, it is the first time I write it. The most common adjectives I heard most when listening to books at work were (face blushed slightly), (laughed out with a "poof") and these adjectives. There is also often emphasis on age, 6 years old, 12 years old, 14 years old. It doesn't matter if I don't write it down, but when I write it down, I feel like it's like a child falling in love early or having a love brain. It's really hard to imagine the male protagonist's body shape. The female protagonist hugs the male protagonist's waist. I think the male protagonist should be a strong and tall man. His face is so handsome that even boys would blush. This is very conflicting and I feel a bit contradictory. I think the male protagonist's Taoist background and occasional hooligan behavior are a bit conflicting.

It's licking Sanwen again. At first, he lied and said he didn't want to follow Sanwen, but then they started playing games together.

I originally wanted to say that the writing was okay, but in fact, I have a wrong outlook. I keep using various words to explain Wei Guangzheng. In fact, I feel like I have a guilty conscience. Betrayal is betrayal, which is different from a quarrel. He licked it to the extreme and dragged another woman into doubt. Please, this is not the same world. Seeing Tai Frankly speaking, I really can't think of anything worthy of you, old man. Why don't you say that you have fallen in love with Ning Fengzhi when you are so focused on acting? Do you think you are Tang San? If he didn't just kneel down to pay homage to the young master, do you think Tang San could let him go and force this matter to be assigned to the protagonist? , It's not bad, the previous sentence about looking at Titan in a different light immediately exploded. When people saw the misery of Tylenol, they showed no mercy. The one who bullied was Liu Erlong, a soul saint. To be honest, I thought I had read a good book. I am not that prejudiced. I can see that I have passed the second creation. The original characters are relatively complete and rich, but there are some weird things that appear from time to time. For example, the fiancée in the previous life, the way she licked her to the extreme, could not be considered affectionate, not to mention that she would always put it on Shui Bing'er, which made people think that she might cheat on her in the next second.

First of all, those who have read other similar articles should know that it is very troublesome to deal with Tang San, and you have to always be on guard against his unexpected attacks, but this is actually because those protagonists took the initiative to provoke Tang San. Secondly, I don't think there's anything wrong with being friends with San. If San is really as selfish as you said, then in the original work there was no need for him to give Dugu Bo's fairy grass to Xiao Wu and the others, especially Ning Rongrong's. He could put these fairy grasses up for auction in the auction house. As long as he showed some of their benefits, he could get a lot of gold soul coins. He even said that if Ning Fengzhi noticed, he could get another few million gold soul coins. Finally, let's talk about Wuhun Temple. It is a camp that is both good and evil. Everyone knows the good side. They have made a lot of contributions to the common people. But it is undeniable that at least 60% of the people from the top to the bottom of Wuhun Temple are scum. What they usually do is bullying men and dominating women. Take Salas in the original article. Let's give an example (actually Salas is pretty good), his attitude towards geniuses is that as long as they don't join Wuhun Palace, they will either suppress them or secretly kill them. Of course, before all this happens, he will indeed recruit. This can actually be regarded as coercion in another sense, because in Douluo Continent, everyone knows how powerful Wuhun Palace is. Strong, and strong strength is equal to huge power in Douluo Continent. The view of geniuses in high positions has always been to either recover or destroy. It can be said that almost everyone knows this. You must not think that they will be merciful and let you go. If you meet them, it can only mean that you are meeting a super kind person. But Bibi Dong won't. She is a madman. She has gone crazy since being forced by Qianxunji. Before that, Qianxunji was her belief. The collapse of her belief was not a small blow to her. You must not imagine that the madman will be soft or anything. If you can, it will only prove that you are too naive. You are still just a child's mentality and are far from rational. It can't be overshadowed by sensibility, and Qianxunji has actually inadvertently carried out a deep PUA on Bibi Dong. Although this may not even be known to Qianxunji herself, you can search the Internet for relevant information (PUA and the like). Bibi Dong is already very awesome when she did not directly go insane after the collapse of her faith, so she will cherish her past. The tenderness she had had, this is why Bibi Dong's reaction was like that after Yu Xiaogang left the Pope's Palace in the original work. Yu Xiaogang's words before leaving can be regarded as completely shattering Bibi Dong's dreams of those beautiful memories in the past. This can only be regarded as Bibi Dong's own fault, but she will never regret her actions. She will only regret her attitude towards Yu Xiaogang, and she has no way to regret it anymore, because there is no room for redemption (even if she tries to redeem it, Yu Xiaogang already has Liu Erlong by his side. He and Liu Erlong finally got together, and he will never give up on Liu Erlong. The reason why he cried after Bibi Dong died at the end of Dou Yi is actually because After all, Bibi Dong was also his first love. And Bibi Dong was still a love brain, so it was actually normal for her to give those information to Yu Xiaogang at that time. After all, love brain is the most difficult disease to treat in the world. Even if it is cut off, she might grow a love brain again in the next life.) So since there is no room for recovery, it is better to just go straight to the dark side. But I admit that from the perspective of the situation in the mainland, letting the Wuhun Palace unify the mainland is the best choice, because assuming there is no Wuhun Palace, no matter who wins the battle between Tiandou and Xingluo, they will never consider the feelings of the civilians after merging into one country. So for the civilians, there will be no flames of war, and the martial soul awakens. Absolutely not, so I think this point is also a serious lack in the original work. After Tang San and the others became gods, they could completely use force to oppress and force the Tiandou Empire to awaken the spirit of every child. In this case, everyone would not have such a deep obsession with the Spirit Hall. But from a perceptual point of view, the Shrek Seven Monsters can be regarded as my favorite characters in the first anime I watched. Even without the fairy grass, they are still geniuses. To know whether they have soul power and whether they can practice, it definitely depends on their talent. Even Tang Third, don't even think about it if the martial spirit is ordinary blue silver grass. It can't defeat the Clear Sky Hammer at all. So assuming that Tang San only has one Clear Sky Hammer martial spirit, Tang Hao should take him back to the Clear Sky Sect. (Assuming that the Clear Sky Sect recognizes Tang San) If the situation is good, it should be the same. He had level 10 soul power the day before yesterday, but in this way, he will only become a pure attack type soul master. He will not even think about the control type. But in the end, if he is very, very, very, very lucky, he may still have a little chance. The person who inherits the throne of Shura, after all, is really not afraid of pain, and it cannot be said that he is not afraid of pain. Anyway, he has a very strong ability to endure pain. But in this way, if he has been living and growing up in Haotian Sect after awakening his martial soul, Then the difficulty for him to regain the other four single-attribute clans should rise sharply. Anyway, Yang Wudi shouldn't be able to win over him. Maybe the Clear Sky Hammer spirit will be exploded by Yang Wudi, and then his Tang Sect's power will be much weaker (Haotian Sect) may not agree with him to establish the Tang Sect), so the twin martial spirits are very important to him. Of course, there is also a possibility that Tang Hao has no intention of taking him back to the Haotian Sect at all, then he should become a blacksmith soul master in the future, so the seven monsters' heaven For the people of their world, he was completely worthy of the term genius, and among the Seven Monsters, except for Dai and Ning, the others actually had very good personalities (Tang San had a wrong outlook on things, which actually had little to do with his own personality, and this In fact, it can be explained by his past life experience. Everything he encountered in his previous life can be said to be being bullied on campus now. How many people you have seen who were bullied have normal minds. If you want me to say that he did not go crazy directly, it is considered that he has a good character). I won't say anything else. Anyway, I don't think the Shrek Seven Devils did anything harmful. Please don't be so prejudiced against them.

To be honest, there is actually no difference to me whether I am Tang San or not. When reading a novel, what you look for is the writing style and conception. Some people say this novel is long-winded, but I think this is what a novel should be like. You don't need to write in a eloquent and coherent way like a masterpiece by a famous writer. But at the very least, the framework must be complete and the writing must be passable. The article seems to be displeased with the mountains. If you like to read mindless and cool articles, please look elsewhere. Those system articles are brainless upgrades of god-level martial arts. They have no framework or ideas at all, and the writing style is ugly to say the least. Don't you feel uncomfortable watching it? I even want to ask if it can be called a novel? If you like things that are slow and unsystematic, you must read this book. Only by taking your time can you appreciate the real joy of reading a novel.

Inconsistent with the introduction There is also a problem with the classification. Chapter 136 of Decisive Killing, tell me what does this overnight mean? It's okay to be imaginative, IQ is online, the characters are vivid and not rigid, it's okay to have a single female protagonist, Chapter 146 What are you writing about? Don't think that if you didn't write anything in the middle, just think that nothing happened. Just because you didn't write, the heroine can basically go. And it's so easy. The classification and introduction are not written well, which always gives me a sense of deja vu. Most people only come in after reading the introduction. Can this make it easier? When I read Chapter 147, I couldn't stand it and said goodbye

The introduction is so careful, even the food, drink, toilet, and sleep are introduced. If it were not so careful, I would never have seen so many nonsense novels.

Don't read the title, especially the title of single heroine. It was okay before Chapter 146, but by Chapter 146 I really have to complain. There is a feeling that the author has a big head controlling a small head when writing this chapter, and there is no explanation. At the end, not to mention it has nothing to do with the title. From Chapter 146 onwards, the plot of this book becomes confusing, and it becomes more and more outrageous later on, directly deviating from the main idea and the core article structure.

It's a mediocre novel, and it seems too boring to say. It also changes the setting of Fatty from the ordinary people before time travel to the encyclopedia of martial arts masters, and forcibly adds a little knowledge for a period of time. When writing, squeeze out a little bit when you think of it. So do you have a general outline and specific background of the characters before writing? The more I look at it, the uglier it becomes.