Military Technology

Let's break up. I suddenly forced myself to write a childish heroine who is disgusting. She acted coquettishly and asked for things when we first met. This is also a heroine. It was good before. But when I saw this forced heroine, I gave up. It would be better not to have a heroine. I guess most of the reasons for the badness of this book lie in the heroine. Can't I write a normal heroine? This woman started looking at the person next to her

It's too wordy. I've seen more than 700 of them. It's not even the first among private companies in China. I can attend an event or hold a press conference and just count the number of words in a few pictures. The plot is written too slowly and there's too much nonsense. I'm a master at word count.

Overall, I feel that the logic is relatively smooth. The most important thing in scientific and technological writings is logic. The shortcomings do not hide the good points. It is fine within a thousand chapters in the beginning, but it becomes too wordy in the later stages. What on earth are you going to talk about after more than 3,000 chapters? It feels like there is no central outline anymore, just whatever comes to mind

Will the heroine die if I don't write about it? Isn't it embarrassing to forcefully add it? Ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Really annoying

Traitor lackeys surrender faction

Nice

I have read more than 3,500 chapters, and the rest of it is really average. I keep emphasizing the righteousness of the family and the country, and keep saying it, every other sentence, a long paragraph, forcibly inciting emotions, and the reading experience is very poor. I only read a few chapters every few months. The rest of it is too watery.

The main line is in a mess. It is useless to develop some military industries that I think are great. Once the technology is built, there is no follow-up. In the end, it is not put to use, and the national strength has not been improved. Water

Forcibly adding a female protagonist, the rhythm is too long-winded